You wake up in a dark room sitting on your ass in no clothes and your body feels weird. The lights turn on and you see a cold empty concrete room with an old tv staring at you. In the reflection of the tv you see yourself and your naked body with a catheter in your urethra and the small tube leads to a jug to your left with a huge tube leading to a facemask/tube to your mouth floating in front of your face connected to a metal cap on your head. Beginning to panic you feel a chain around your neck connected by a masterlock in the front with the chain going behind your neck wrapped around a metal pipe on a bigger chain that looks like it'll shift up or down.
The tv turns on and you see the evil puppet. It does its normal thing (telling you why you're here and stuff about life) but tells you how to escape. "When the video is over, the helmet will clamp the facemask to your mouth where you must drink the half gallon of your own urine to relieve the pressure of the jug on the pressure sensors underneath it. When the jug is empty the tv will turn on and show you where the key to your neck lock is. Throughout the game every 1 minute the chain on the wall behind you will shift upwards bringing you to your feet and eventually off the ground till you no longer breathe. Should you break contact with the facemask using your hands you will automatically lose the game. You have 15 minutes. Let the game begin."
Probably not.
You're a terrible writer
It all depends what I've been eating for the past week.
Err... what if you don't have to go?
The OP sounds like something off a bad movie
The tv turns off and the chain shifts upward once as the helmet closes and the facemask into your mouth. You can taste the smell of the urine in your mouth as tears begin to shed from your face. You struggle and struggle with the helmet hoping to find a weakness and you grapple at the chain around your neck hoping to find a way to break it lose.
The chain shifts upward again as a minute passes and you now have 14 minutes to win the game. Mustering up the strength to do the deed, you inhale and watch as your urine makes its way up the tube and closer and closer to your mouth. Breaking suction you hope and wish that somewhere, the helmet or chain will break if you can mess with them some more. They remain solid as the chain lifts up again lifting your ass inches off the ground and you struggle to keep from suffocating right then and there.
You inhale from the tube again and suck in the urine to your mouth, closing your eyes you suck it deep and taste a rancid flood of urine in your mouth and down your throat. Tears stream down your face as you fight to survive.
You break suction again and notice you've taken in quite a bit from the jug but feel like you're about to throw up. Struggling to keep it in, you realize if you throw up, you'll have to drink urine and puke, and the idea almost throws you over the edge as you almost panic at the thought. Sucking in deeply again you begin chugging the piss and feel like you're getting closer to living as the chain lifts your body up inch by inch, minute by minute.
Interesting idea, but you should make your sentences shorter and easier to understand.
[QUOTE=Craptasket;24382092]The OP sounds like something off a bad movie[/QUOTE]
Yeah it's called Saw they made like 10 of them
What if you're kinky like me and enjoy watersports?
[QUOTE=BurnBlackJay;24382104]Yeah it's called Saw they made like 10 of them[/QUOTE]
by the title I thought this trap involved an actual saw
The importance of fucking capitalizing
9 minutes in, you see the juge is nearly empty and you're standing up straight now and you make that last pull to finish the game. Nearly gagging the whole experience, you finish it and the tv turns on to show you your neck chain and behind it attached to the metal pipe by tape hangs the key. Your first reaction is to quickly grab it but realize the risk of dropping the key which would be signing your own death certificate. calmly as the chain drags you up on your toes you take the key and struggle to unlock the lock. Thoughts race through your mind, what if the key doesn't work? what if I'm holding it upside down? Before the chain lifts you up to your death you hear the click and unlock the lock and fall to your hands and knees safely as the chain is shifted upwards again. You throw up the horrible liquid you just ingested and look up to see the door unlock and open. You stand up slowly and make your way to the door and follow down a corridor to another door which leads you outside of the abandoned meat factory you almost died in.
Cool story bro.
You're a really, really bad writer PLEASE stop
I'm thirsty now.
Okay seriously, Saw traps are painful, not just gross. This is dumb.
If it's a choice between dying or drinking a half gallon of piss everyone would pick the latter.
[QUOTE=Spycrabz;24382227]I'm thirsty now.[/QUOTE]
same brb drinking piss
Your body would reject the piss. You wouldn't be able to keep it down. You'd throw up before nine minutes for sure.
OP should try this. Post results.
Doesn't that require you to have that much piss?
I mean...damn...
If it's first thing in the morning then maybe...
But i've probably got morning wood...so shit might get all kinked up with the hoses and the gas mask.
This plan sucks.
I no longer want to play the piss-mask game.
Aren't saw traps supposed to be about pain not "Eeeew icky pee eeeeeeewww"?
So, I need to drink Urine while standing up, then get a key or... I suffocate? That's not particularly dangerous, Urine is the cleanest fluid produced by our body.
:downswords:
It would be funnier if it was poop
AFAIK, Piss is full of deadly toxins, so one way you're left getting choked, and the other way you're left poisoned.
[QUOTE=Heigou;24383581]AFAIK, Piss is full of deadly toxins, so one way you're left getting choked, and the other way you're left poisoned.[/QUOTE]
The lack of knowledge...
Is strong with you.
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