• Some Spoken Word/Poetry/General Lyrics i wrote in self-reflection
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This is some spoken word/poetry/general lyrics I wrote in the swing of the moment [b]haha me.[/b] [quote= "haha me"] I wonder about the nights like these, lyrics so spontaenous surrounding so dark merely leeching all of my creativeness if anything, sleep would be a good delivery those repeated little Z's that help me understand where i'm meant to be i think to myself, "am i too chilled to express emotion" but boredom is an emotion that comes quick my mere lack of locomotion, i know is straining my devotion, to writing lyrics that are regarded as sick so is this to, get me back on my feet, realise my position or just for me to write lines to illustrate what i'm thinking or just for to me to have another interrupted lyrical writing proccess not achieving anything but excess or maybe even helping me to gloat less gloat less? yeah i meant the opposite but saying that out loud is a performance on your imagination will have a ticket to i don't write lyrics to be a spiritual individual but really because i feel it's what i'm meant to do in the past, there were times like these where i just explored WWW dot like a labyrinth google was the minotaur, provoking me to never stop and just plain think but times like this is where i do, reliving and reminscining about many wasted opportunities where i could be, or couldn't be, if i took or gave, attitude equal to tomfoolery i'm not trying to brag, not being self-concious either, if anything i'm too cocky for that sort of feeling as i find myself appealing in many ways but i've noticed that as i write, type, scribe, think, link, line, rhyme and mine through thoughts in my brain, i rehearse the lyrics like i have in past days i guess, it's like active versus passive, as i still reinact act that i've did many a time in the past, yet i now think whilst i commit them i still think of words that rhyme before i type as i know it would be bad if i wrote these so called lyrics without rhythm or lyricisim i know i'll show this to others, they'll stare at and regard as a story, maybe a poem, but i still regard this as... music striving to be concious rapper like common, with anthem like, "I Used to love H.E.R" replaying in my head yet acoustic the lyrics so much clearer when your mind is 100% comitted anthems in every genre leaving each and neither of them addictive i guess that's just me, i state to like every genre but they're some i've like longer, and will like longer. [/quote] I don't know if C&C would help, as it was meant as a general reflection for y'all to see but sure... [b]C&C[/b].
I'm a big fan of spoken word and overall it sounds great. Just the last line doesn't seem to feel rite. I can't put my finger on it.
Thank you, and hm... I know what you mean, I myself felt like I brought it to an abrupt close.
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