[ NEW ] Ravenholm - Network ( Drum and Bass ) Feedback please :)
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I Love feedback, it helps me when you guys express your opinions so please do, but be respectful!
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I think you have the right idea and it's getting there but there's a few things I noticed.
1. The volume of the track needs to come up a lot. (But that's obviously not a hard fix.)
2. The drum patterns you're using could use some work. I can tell it's drum and bass but I think a different snare sample for the main snare would be better, it sounds a little strange, and some more snare samples in there would help too. (Just look at the basic amen break for example.) Some more percussion might help too. The hi-hats get a little old after awhile of just being the same rhythm.
3. The melodies seem fine but maybe add a bit more variation.
Hope I could help, nice work!
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