• Song I wrote - "Your Only Lover"
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Just a song I wrote when I felt deep in love. It isn't quite the best but I've been working on it. Tell me what you guys think. If I was gone would you still remember me? All the moments we shared, they were fun for sure Young at first, a silly romance To me it was more than that We can really make this last I would always say True, I am crazy But baby this can really last Hold on just a little longer Time is slowing down Just two lovers and the moments we share Nothing can hold us back I loved you forever but, darling do you too? That we will never know, such a complicated question All I know is that you are mine and I am yours For now That's how it used to be Now things have really changed It's been days but it seems like forever Just like our love should have been In the end it was all a lie You deny all of that as if it never was Gone now is our history Thing could change, maybe dear You would always say Now all I can do is pray...
Nice job thou. Too sappy for me. Good effort.
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Good stuff OP. Also, I tend to write sappier songs when a girl is a part of my life, I've actually started recording songs lately because of a girl.
Not a song, just a poem as of now. Put some music to it.
[QUOTE=Pepin;24972993]Not a song, just a poem as of now. Put some music to it.[/QUOTE] Indeed more of a poem at the moment. I need to add the music together for it.
Sounds nice to me.
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