Just a song I wrote when I felt deep in love.
It isn't quite the best but I've been working on it. Tell me what you guys think.
If I was gone would you still remember me?
All the moments we shared, they were fun for sure
Young at first, a silly romance
To me it was more than that
We can really make this last I would always say
True, I am crazy
But baby this can really last
Hold on just a little longer
Time is slowing down
Just two lovers and the moments we share
Nothing can hold us back
I loved you forever but, darling do you too?
That we will never know, such a complicated question
All I know is that you are mine and I am yours
For now
That's how it used to be
Now things have really changed
It's been days but it seems like forever
Just like our love should have been
In the end it was all a lie
You deny all of that as if it never was
Gone now is our history
Thing could change, maybe dear
You would always say
Now all I can do is pray...
Nice job thou. Too sappy for me.
Good effort.
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Good stuff OP.
Also, I tend to write sappier songs when a girl is a part of my life, I've actually started recording songs lately because of a girl.
Not a song, just a poem as of now. Put some music to it.
[QUOTE=Pepin;24972993]Not a song, just a poem as of now. Put some music to it.[/QUOTE]
Indeed more of a poem at the moment. I need to add the music together for it.
Sounds nice to me.
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