• WIP Crazed Mutant
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Heres a image i'm working atm, not finished yet and was hoping to get some crit so i can modify it. Any C&C is appreciated. The background of the character is him waking up in a lab after being kidnapped by scientists, he has bones growing out of his body. And he's pissed. [img]http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/8733/quillw.jpg[/img]
Not too bad. I think maybe his torso looks kinda inflated, especially his lower back, the right tricep looks kinda saggy. I do like the facial expression though.
Ah yeah i can see. Thanks :) I was trying to get a disfigured look going but i guess i sacrificed too much shape and form for it to look natural.
Cool, I'd like to see the final version =] Just don't forget to fix his left hand, like xamllew said his back is kind of inflated and his pelvis part ( everything below the waist ) should be a little higher
Thanks :) ah yeah, thanks for the crit. ill go make the modifications. :D
Make some of the bones abit more recognizable, when I saw it without reading the post I thought he was covered in broken glass. Also the back looks abit funny, making the charecter look abit puffy. Apart from that, looks good.
I didn't realize those were bones until you told me they were bones. Make some of them stand out more, and or actually start to look like bones, and not glass. Keep in mind that if it's going to be bone, most of the time it's going to look more like rhino horns growing out of you and not jagged pieces of metal. also, I don't know what the thing he's holding is, but make sure it's something that would be located in a laboratory. I've seen a lot of things where someone's holding a baseball bat and they aren't somewhere a baseball bat should be in the first place.
[QUOTE=k00lwhip;16337229]I didn't realize those were bones until you told me they were bones. Make some of them stand out more, and or actually start to look like bones, and not glass. Keep in mind that if it's going to be bone, most of the time it's going to look more like rhino horns growing out of you and not jagged pieces of metal. also, I don't know what the thing he's holding is, but make sure it's something that would be located in a laboratory. I've seen a lot of things where someone's holding a baseball bat and they aren't somewhere a baseball bat should be in the first place.[/QUOTE] Yeahh :) i was experimenting here as to what the bones would look like, maybe trying to stylise them or something. And the thing hes going to be holding is a piece of debris. But i can see what everyones been saying about how they look like glass.
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