Dubstep songs i made

[Jimmymi]

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Constructive critizism please

[RSN]

The first one could really give me "kallsvett (cold sweat)", but in the bad way. Sorry, but it very messy and i don't feel comfortable when listening to it. Try to make a note-pattern that sounds good when put together, instead of this.

A good thing is the robotic/mechanic sound you make. That sounds cool, but it kinda gets ruined by the mess :D
Keep doing that robotic style, but try to clean it up a bit.