• A compilation of literally insane stuff that I write
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Parallel Creation Parallel worlds in creation unfolds, one side I recon as my own My mind taught me choice, my surroundings gave me a voice An identity to share, to love and to fear all I can bear When my eyes can finally see, I'm at the mirrored screen For in perspective lies deception, the other is perception Now I can no longer choose, as seeing the illusion is to lose Puppet of evolution, the other hand is delusion Strings of my soul, governed by the mathematical goal Trapped and afraid, in the curse of sentience There is no escape, from this form of primal ape As I am judged by sentence, through the road in the empty desert And to walk upon the path, from birth to old I ask myself the reason why, do I live to simply die Objective Life The vastness of time, defines our genetic line Everything perceivable by mind, a tiny variable to find The seeing mind meaningless in eternity, temporarily stuck in a vessel of time Emotionless motions, observation around Experiencing emotions, though meaningless in time Slaves of consciousness, thralls of circumstances Observers of themselves, experiencers of the mind Atom by atom, matter by matter, dead or alive By objective definition, there is no structural difference Gatherers of external stimuli, ghosts of both past and the future Bio-mechanical beings Bio-mechanical beings in nature we dawn, dynamic of walking as blessed by Faun Perfected precepts in perseverance of perception, preferred by the protection in natural selection The exceed in need to be, this deed of feed will seed our greed Slaves of exposure, days to procreate ours, in limitless explosions of sexual lure Curse of the eternal oblivion As the bully smirks his battle ready inclination, my shattered self control displays vindication, I will break his mental foundation. - When the air rumbles through the echoing footprints on your flesh torn bones, when you have become the very maggot swarming dirt you stand upon, I shall have my satisfaction. - And when the smothered essence of your humanity screams in the dark, I shall shackle your last instinct as your drowning body sinks into the twitching panic of realization. - As the shadow of your former self stares into the abyss of death, only the pale resentment of your corpse will gaze back. - In the halls of oblivion, the wheezing remnants of flesh will crawl again to claim the thrall that you have become. I choose though not to fight, as I am blinded by my self loving vanity, my mind demands pure clarity. Never will he comprehend the corrosive judgement that was going to be placed upon his smiling hollow soul of shallow insignificance. Some random stuff: My sole entrenched soul, as judicator Death my name as whole, through shadows my purpose and goal, I welcome the eternal foe; Mortality of the living light, however though thriving, the seeds of time sprouting, filling your pond is binding, for my contract ends in drowning Societal fanatics confined by norms, I for one reject this combined force. Though occurred to me that unbound by these to be, is being weird for the sake of being weird. So alas I am bound again, though higher perception I have found, this perspective of humankind. The pure frustration and anger changed his head to rage colored blood as he sat in the miserable battle of relieving his constipated bathroom visit, when the realization of something inconceivable sets in like an explosion followed by emotional breakdown ensued with a cry proclaiming apostasy. The shopping list of oblivion had denied him access to toilet paper to which chaos erupted in the room where hell itself seemed like an appealing vacation.
CC has a lot of angsty teenagers lately.
[QUOTE=Loofiloo;43530874]CC has a lot of angsty teenagers lately.[/QUOTE] I wrote this several years ago, and your comment doesn't exactly provide constructive criticism, or any criticism at all for that matter. What on earth made you crawl out of bed with such a feeling of spontaneity today, to not even follow the rules of a system? Did you leave your house from your window too? Just kidding man.
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