[Electro/Dubstep] Renin - Dimensions | Extremely unfinished, just need C&C on intro and drop.

[Rome]

The intro was rather botched to just give myself a base to work with. As such, it's pretty simplistic and lacks a LOT of character. As for the drop, I'd love some advice and suggestions. I am FAR from satisfied with it, and I'm in serious need of ideas for improvement.

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[PhaZe!]

Sounds good to me.

[Rome]

Thanks but there's nothing you would change?

[Adeptus]

You are on the good way. Intro is pretty good, though if you aren't making your whole song last long,like at least 5 or 6 minutes long, the intro may be a little too extense.

[Feralicous]

The intro is great, gorgeous filtering. When the drums come in, I would make the drums more subby or add a sub bass to give it that extra oomph, it's lacking in the low end. Mid and high freqs are great.

Also, during the build up, I would leave the snares out. Just my opinion.

[Rome]

[QUOTE=Feralicous;33917863]The intro is great, gorgeous filtering. When the drums come in, I would make the drums more subby or add a sub bass to give it that extra oomph, it's lacking in the low end. Mid and high freqs are great.

Also, during the build up, I would leave the snares out. Just my opinion.[/QUOTE]

The buildup is one of the weakest parts IMO. As well as the initial synth after the drop. It lacks punch and I'm struggling to fix it. The buildup will be something I come back to later.

In fact, I may just postpone this whole song, since I've started a new DnB piece today that I'm starting to like a lot.

[Timo★]

I'd leave out the high pitched vocals, but thats my personal preference, they are just so overused and clichè.