Two Halo Drawings I did at school And A heavy weapons guy with huge butterfly knives

[luckymonster13]

this is the first time I post anything I've drawn
My friends say that what I looks amazing but I need you to tell me the truth
Noble team
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Master chief
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the Heavy with Knives
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Tell me what you think

[r1ck]

Thats really awesome.
But why is the heavy using knives? you should draw a spy with knives.

[ChestyMcGee]

I like the sketchy nature of the first picture but some of the proportions are a little off (a lot of the arms look rather short, especially the central guy) and it kinda lacks depth and definition - all the characters blur into each other.

[Pespi]

They're misproportioned, the poses seem very unnatural and off-balance and anatomy takes a dive at alot of places. Looks really half-assed and the tones are not very varied, it's just gray.

[technologic]

They are basically doodles. As pepsi (doomish I think) said, its also very gray. The heavy one is semi-acceptable but the other two look horrible.

[Pespi]

He clearly defined them as drawings. Just cause you did them at school doesn't mean they should be half-assed.

[luckymonster13]

Thank you I see what you mean and I agree the only thing I find harsh is the half ass comment but thats fine I'll work on them and once again thank you

[Skyward]

Jorge's gun looks a bit small.