Hi all,
Just finished a free-hand drawing which took me FOREVER to finish! Constructive-criticism please :eng101:
[IMG]http://i42.tinypic.com/2mow655.jpg[/IMG]
The shading is nice I guess, you need to work on your proportions though
Bottom part of the body looks to small compared to the top.
yeah the proportions are weird, and you should work a bit more on your shadows, for example the stomach a bit flat, like it has no volume
Thanks guys :)
Nice tits though
While your drawings a decent, you should consider a thread for all of them.
Looks pretty nice but im not a drawing expert neither can I draw but I do have to agree that the bottom looks smaller compared to the top.
This used to happen to me when I didn't make an underlying sketch, always focus on proportion and construction before even considering shading or detail or you'll end up with a mutant. Step back and look at it, look at it in a mirror, measure it with the original, anything you have to do to make sure you've got it.
Her left hand.
Looks nice. The head looks too big imo.
This is very good actually ! I can't draw a third of that ! Just try to improve the proportions first !
Try maybe to do a draft of her shape.
[editline]7th February 2012[/editline]
I did that quickly.
It's just my point of view of how she could be.
But very nice drawing again.
[IMG]http://img825.imageshack.us/img825/2552/2mow656.jpg[/IMG]
the lower torso, hip and leg proportions are also off.
[QUOTE=cocknugget;34542223]Nice tits though[/QUOTE]
Actually they look flat. It looks like the bra ends right at the bottom which makes it look like she has really saggy and thin breasts. That part is in dire need of some shading to make the breasts look round and nice.
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