A nifty short track called Dysfunctia that I started and then finished in one afternoon.

[TheSmartass]

[media]http://soundcloud.com/bartonjames/dystfunctia[/media]

Pretty happy with it considering that it's the first song I've made that is actually complete.

All made with only one instrument, too. A slightly modified 3x oscillator plugin.

Your thoughts, gentlemen?

[Lufttygger306]

Too short

Also, it sounds a little 'messy'

[Yur|ko]

This is hardly complete.

Lacks sections and length. Also that synth sounds terrible.

[xenodrox]

I like it, but that synth is not for everybody. It's a cool little ditty, reminds me of 16-bit game intro music. Maybe a little low-pass filtering would help, but I think you'll need to boost the mids too or it'll sound muffled. You're on the right track and you have a good ear for melody and rhythm.

[Bobie]

it sounds like it was made in 10 minutes

the melody is nice and has potential but please, for the love of god work on something for more than a few hours if you're serious about it

[Croix]

[QUOTE=xenodrox;33049896]I like it, but that synth is not for everybody. It's a cool little ditty, reminds me of 16-bit game intro music. Maybe a little low-pass filtering would help, but I think you'll need to boost the mids too or it'll sound muffled. You're on the right track and you have a good ear for melody and rhythm.[/QUOTE]

DOnt say things when you dont know what they mean

[editline]31st October 2011[/editline]

Low pass filter -> boost the mids :v: