• Story i'm working on (Let The Criticism Begin)
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This story features some strong language so discretion is advised. I've been writing this for a while now and it's primarily based upon my own observations of life and a gaming addiction being brought together. Pages 1-6 in .png format (can be opened by most image viewers) [url]http://www.megaupload.com/?d=9FLBDLQY[/url] Please give any criticism or praise as this is my first attempt at releasing work.
Copy/pasting it somewhere would be nicer. I can't be bothered downloading it.
[QUOTE=johan_sm;25200213]Copy/pasting it somewhere would be nicer. I can't be bothered downloading it.[/QUOTE] Sorry but I think it's better with the illustrations etc. The story lacks the effect without them.
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