• Some Lyrics -WIP-
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I posted these before, but i've updated them since then. What i really need aid in is making a chorus (i honestly hate making them and usually go without one but i thought i'd switch things up a little). My alias is Klaash, as me and my friend (jokingly seriously?) made a band called NRK (Noone remembers Krypton) and Klaash is a superman villain. [b]C&C please[/b]. Instrumental used: [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wFieAwNDaZY[/media] [b]Note: Apologies for any bad spelling or any poor punctuation[/b] [img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/6627/klaash.png[/img] [quote] the definition of beauty, a figure of perfection eyes that mesmerise, with a mind that grabs attention her mind pushes attention, makes everyone inferior think about about the internal, as opposed to the exterior how am i to approach, devote, what i do not have how do i attract, and everyday, witness your laugh see, the questions i question myself with make you smile, but they're answers undealt with, a list aslong as the nile if you have a solution, only one comes to mind where you're holding my hand, like a pheonix, we'll walk the line 24/7 you'll be mine, vice versa, i will stay true understand there's not a thing that i will ever do to ever make you pain, weep, cry to ever make you strain, and deeply deny the relations, that we constantly making we tried to stay away, but couldn't stop the temptation see girl, i think i'm lost in the wealth of your beauty your mind is divine, but your looks is what consumes me i bless my mind periodically, everytime i think of you think of your heart, as a helping hand, and i need yours to pull me through [b]-CHORUS-[/b] this whole thing, i understand, may appear abit cheesy and hopefully, my poetry won't come across as needy you can rate me optomistic, but i'd rather love stricken as a fine example of the opposite sex leaves me smitten supposed to be a short story, but hapily ever after our kids in the crib and we live in a home of laughter was on a pursuit of happiness and now i've found the finish your love was a tree and now i'm in an armour of your splinters and damn, whatelse am i supposed to say truth and emotion: the main token in this exposé and the emotion i feel here is clear and uncensored and anywhere you are just happens to be where i'm centered i chuckle. because wow, you're like gravity doesn't matter where i am, your love won't release it's hands on me like cudi i make her say, thinking about her day 'n night this adolescent up in heaven, luminescent with delight. [/quote]
I like your lyrics, they are very unique!
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