I posted these before, but i've updated them since then. What i really need aid in is making a chorus (i honestly hate making them and usually go without one but i thought i'd switch things up a little). My alias is Klaash, as me and my friend (jokingly seriously?) made a band called NRK (Noone remembers Krypton) and Klaash is a superman villain. [b]C&C please[/b].
Instrumental used:
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wFieAwNDaZY[/media]
[b]Note: Apologies for any bad spelling or any poor punctuation[/b]
[img]http://img197.imageshack.us/img197/6627/klaash.png[/img]
[quote]
the definition of beauty, a figure of perfection
eyes that mesmerise, with a mind that grabs attention
her mind pushes attention, makes everyone inferior
think about about the internal, as opposed to the exterior
how am i to approach, devote, what i do not have
how do i attract, and everyday, witness your laugh
see, the questions i question myself with make you smile,
but they're answers undealt with, a list aslong as the nile
if you have a solution, only one comes to mind
where you're holding my hand, like a pheonix, we'll walk the line
24/7 you'll be mine, vice versa, i will stay true
understand there's not a thing that i will ever do
to ever make you pain, weep, cry
to ever make you strain, and deeply deny
the relations, that we constantly making
we tried to stay away, but couldn't stop the temptation
see girl, i think i'm lost in the wealth of your beauty
your mind is divine, but your looks is what consumes me
i bless my mind periodically, everytime i think of you
think of your heart, as a helping hand, and i need yours to pull me through
[b]-CHORUS-[/b]
this whole thing, i understand, may appear abit cheesy
and hopefully, my poetry won't come across as needy
you can rate me optomistic, but i'd rather love stricken
as a fine example of the opposite sex leaves me smitten
supposed to be a short story, but hapily ever after
our kids in the crib and we live in a home of laughter
was on a pursuit of happiness and now i've found the finish
your love was a tree and now i'm in an armour of your splinters
and damn, whatelse am i supposed to say
truth and emotion: the main token in this exposé
and the emotion i feel here is clear and uncensored
and anywhere you are just happens to be where i'm centered
i chuckle. because wow, you're like gravity
doesn't matter where i am, your love won't release it's hands on me
like cudi i make her say, thinking about her day 'n night
this adolescent up in heaven, luminescent with delight.
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I like your lyrics, they are very unique!
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