Mime - Sensory Deprived

[Dclone2]

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My first Digital drawing that I'm happy with.

OP updated.
Original V1 [img_thumb]http://th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2010/210/1/3/Sensory_Deprived_by_Dclone2.jpg[/img_thumb]

[3v3ryb0dy]

complaints about thumb curve on right hand and too many details in some areas and no details in others.

[DOG-GY]

I'd say that mainly it lacks a standard of thickness in strokes. I mean to say that different size strokes are fine, but they don't seem to be placed with care to composition here.

If anyone who gets what I'm saying and can describe it better pls step in

[3v3ryb0dy]

Overall lack of central styling, which is important for such things.

[Yur|ko]

I'll ignore everyone else and say it looks good.

[Dclone2]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23714186]Overall lack of [b]central styling[/b], which is important for such things.[/QUOTE]

I honestly don't know what that means.

[editline]09:42PM[/editline]

[QUOTE=DOG-GY;23713370]I'd say that mainly it lacks a standard of thickness in strokes. I mean to say that different size strokes are fine, but they don't seem to be placed with care to composition here.

If anyone who gets what I'm saying and can describe it better pls step in[/QUOTE]

So, you're saying it would be better if all the lines were more the same size overall?

[editline]09:42PM[/editline]

[QUOTE=Yur|ko;23714504]I'll ignore everyone else and say it looks good.[/QUOTE]

Thanks :buddy:

[3v3ryb0dy]

I mean when you do lines, outlines are thicker, everything is evenly detailed and evenly realistic. General system for stuff.

Like making the incredibles so that they don't have realistic hands, anime hair and macabre face.

[Dclone2]

So what throws it off being a completely 'centralized' style, exactly?

[3v3ryb0dy]

overly detailed neck, mouth, different styled lines from legs, barret, headphones and the gap between the baret and headphones is lacking etc.
little things.

[Dclone2]

[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23715983]overly detailed neck, mouth, different styled lines from legs, barret, headphones and the gap between the baret and headphones is lacking etc.
little things.[/QUOTE]

Op undated. Better?

[dgg]

Update is much better indeed. Makes it more clean and neat.

[3v3ryb0dy]

Clean and good. Now unfuck the shouldestrap clip and we're done here.

[Dclone2]

Done and done.
Thanks for the comments peoples.