Working on a song, what do you guys think

[JoeyZ]

So this is the third song I've tried to make on my computer, and according to my peers the only decent one so far :v:

[url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/11891459/All%20of%20us%20%28Rough%20mix%29%20WIP.wav[/url]

What do you guys think, and what should I add/get rid of?

Also, working on a bridge as we speak

[jakeabbott96]

It's a bit repetitive with the riffs, but I can see what you've tried to do and you've obviously achieved it. A club / house theme. A good backing track for some lyrics. Not the sort of things I'd listen to, but well made nonetheless. Good choice of effects, too.
Really does need a bridge, though, or some sort of alternative. That and the piece isn't very unique, just structured and made in a traditional manner. Four bars, change, four bars, change, etc.
No problem, though. Looking forward to the finished piece, but there's a definite room for improvement. ;)

[JoeyZ]

[QUOTE=jakeabbott96;33033045]That and the piece isn't very unique, just structured and made in a traditional manner. Four bars, change, four bars, change, etc.[/QUOTE]

Honestly, I blame the visual interface on Sony Acid, I get a bit OCD with the patterns

But thanks for the feedback, I'll work on it some more tomorrow