i need someone to write me words for a song about a guy whose got suspicious thoughts about his girlfreind and theyre relationship, and thinks that somehows somethings going to happen thatll screw it up even though its completely fine, and then gets too paranoid and ends up freaking the girl out and she breaks up with him. then maybe he kills himself
But.. then it won't be you who have written the song :blush:
well i need help. anyone who does it will be mentioned in some gigantic way. its just for fun
[QUOTE=jordan65536;16445205]well i need help. anyone who does it will be mentioned in some gigantic way. its just for fun[/QUOTE]
Genre and overall style would help.. and structure perhaps..
I just came up with a song for you now.
Load up on guns
Brings your friends
It's fun to lose
and to pretend
She's overboard
Self assured
Oh no I know
A dirty word
Hello, hello, hello, hello
Hello, hello, hello, hello
Hello, hello, hello, hello
Hello, hello, hello
With the lights out
It's less dangerous
Here we are now
Entertain us
I feel stupid
and contagious
Here we are now
entertain us
A mulado
A bravado
A mosquito
My libido
YEAH
That's all I got so far, check back in a little bit.
do you like nirvana? i like you man. your funny. holy shit no wonder youve been sayin that. my profile pictures nirvana.
I think my gf is a cheater
So I get in the closet
Now I'm in the closet
I'm watching my girlfriend
It's been a few days in the closet
I think she's still cheating
So I yell from the closet
She looks at me with a funny expression
So I pull out my gun!
She says I'm fucked
I tell to come in the closet
She walks up to the closet
Then she shuts the door
Now I'm alone in the dark closet
So I shoot myself with my gun!
Now I'm deceased in the closet.
Now go melt some hearts and make some money for a song you didn't make.:banjo:
well i wasnt thinking something like that. fuck it. ill make one myself. nice lyrics though.
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well that wasnt what i was thinking. fuck it. ill make one myself. nice lyrics though.
[QUOTE=OutOfPop;16445548]I think my gf is a cheater
So I get in the closet
Now I'm in the closet
I'm watching my girlfriend
It's been a few days in the closet
I think she's still cheating
So I yell from the closet
She looks at me with a funny expression
So I pull out my gun!
She says I'm fucked
I tell to come in the closet
She walks up to the closet
Then she shuts the door
Now I'm alone in the dark closet
So I shoot myself with my gun!
Now I'm deceased in the closet.[/QUOTE]
CLOSET!!
Closet!
Closet.
closet.
*Violin descending line*
[QUOTE=jordan65536;16445578]well i wasnt thinking something like that. fuck it. ill make one myself. nice lyrics though..[/QUOTE]
Was a parody of South Park
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ho-A19fnKBc[/media]
oh. cool. that makes sense i guess.
There's a guy
he's suspicious
about his girlfriend
and their relationship
He's paranoid
thinks some shit's gonna go down
and screw it right up
even though it's completely fine.
He confronts the bitch
she flips a shit
leaves that assholoe
He finds a gun
Shoots himself in the eye
leaves a mess for his parents to clean up
Not many people cared because he was a douche
There's some lyrics for you. It's written in free verse.
thats funny. i hate r-kelly. you know he pissed on some bitch?
[QUOTE=OutOfPop;16445613]Was a parody of South Park
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ho-A19fnKBc[/media][/QUOTE]
Which is originally a parody of R Kelly's trapped in the closet series
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JV_N7i-95Nk[/media]
I recommend watching all 22 parts out so far, it's surprisingly good.
cool. i dont know if thatll work though. it needs to rhyme for it to work for me though
[QUOTE=jordan65536;16445470]do you like nirvana? i like you man. your funny. holy shit no wonder youve been sayin that. my profile pictures nirvana.[/QUOTE]
Lol, yeah.
Well, I don't know you, or what style of music you play. I don't know your views on any topic or what you've been through personally, so it's kind of hard to write a song. Even just knowing the genre would give someone a better idea.
[QUOTE=Malumbre;16445725]Lol, yeah.
Well, I don't know you, or what style of music you play. I don't know your views on any topic or what you've been through personally, so it's kind of hard to write a song. Even just knowing the genre would give someone a better idea.[/QUOTE]
What the fuck are you doing, are you on your way?
well its like grunge and alternative stuff. i guess it would be kind of hard to write to.
I'm the man in the closet
Buried in my shirts
Won't you come and rate me, rate me
Feed my eyes, can you close the blinds?
Jesus Christ, shoot my girlfriend
He who tries, will be rewarded
Feed my eyes now you've closed the blinds
I'm the wife who gets beat
Shove my nose in the kitchen
Won't you come and shave me, shave me
Feed my eyes, can you close the blinds?
Jesus Christ, shoot my girlfriend
He who tries, will be rewarded
Feed my eyes now you've closed the blinds
Feed my eyes, can you close the blinds?
Jesus Christ, shoot my girlfriend
He who tries, will be rewarded
Feed my eyes now you've closed the blinds
let me guess. alice in chains?
man in the box
[QUOTE=jordan65536;16445794]well its like grunge and alternative stuff. i guess it would be kind of hard to write to.[/QUOTE]
Nah, shouldn't be too hard.
this r kelly shits hard for me to follow. im stuck on what happened in #5
[B][i]In the land of Osyrhia, one Knight freed the beautiful princess from the dragon...[/i][/B]
[img]http://static.desktopnexus.com/wallpapers/49879-bigthumbnail.jpg[/img]
Once upon a time in ancient centuries
Where the Kings ruled the world with their iron fists
One Knight slew the Dragon of Hate
And freed the Princess from eternal pain
Home they rode, deeply in love
Through the fields of light
They'll return to their land
But something wasn't right as they rested that night
[i]The Holy Knights of Osyrhia
Will raise their swords - they'll win tonight
'Cause for freedom and glory the knight will return home
And forever they'll both carry on..[/i]
When the Knight woke up he looked around
Nowhere was the princess to be found
"Did the dragon return?" - "No, it can't be true!"
He got up on his horse and they flew
Over the mountains of twilight
And past the forest of gold
But never too far from the love in his heart
And its power will shine through
[i]The Holy Knights of Osyrhia
Will raise their swords - they'll win tonight
'Cause for freedom and glory the knight will return home
And forever they'll both carry on..[/i]
"OH MY FAIR LADY! WHERE ART THOU?
DID I CHASE YOU AWAY?"
[b]Guitar solo[/b]
[img]http://metalsapuca.files.wordpress.com/2008/07/kikoloureiro-747656.jpg[/img]
[b]Keyboard solo[/b]
[img]http://es.geocities.com/weitinia/jensjohansson.jpg[/img]
The princess was nowhere to be found
Not even with the wizard's mighty spell
The knight tore a crack in the ground
He'll rode down to the flames, down into hell
[i]The Holy Knights of Osyrhia
Will raise their swords - they'll win tonight
'Cause for freedom and glory the knight will return home
And forever he will carry on..[/i]
[img]http://www.wizards.com/dnd/images/dx20061222_dec.jpg[/img]
holy shit the above one
do not DO NOT [b]DO NOT[/b] write corny lyrics, for the love of god I cannot stress this enough.
[QUOTE=Bob Sagat;16447408]Song[/QUOTE]
For the love of god make this song.
When i was a young boy
my father....
more like write a song for me
[QUOTE=xiempie;16458366]When i was a young boy
my father....[/QUOTE]
Killed a man in Reno
Just to watch him die...
[QUOTE=xiempie;16458366]When i was a young boy
my father....[/QUOTE]
Was a drinker and a fiend.
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