With the last logo I made ended up being a failed attempt (looked like shit), I decided to make a new one:
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/99577/New%20Topline%20non%20vector.png[/img]
This other one below I ripped the logoized "T" from another site and I'm afraid they'll catch it's prohibited use.
[img]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/99577/topline%20logo.jpg[/img]
I like the first one better. Maybe you could add shadows to all the other letters as well.
Get rid of the shadows. Second one would look ok if it had no shadows.
The mark looks alright, the whole stripey thing makes it look like it was designed years ago though and makes it look really cumbersome. The rounded edges on the stroke on the T don't fit with the hard edges on the rest of the lettering, and the type kind of looks like ass in general (just looks like you picked a random sans serif typeface that came with windows)
I've seen worse as far as people posting logos on FP but there's definitely a lot of room for improvement.
[QUOTE=KmartSqrl;19647808]The mark looks alright, the whole stripey thing makes it look like it was designed years ago though and makes it look really cumbersome. The rounded edges on the stroke on the T don't fit with the hard edges on the rest of the lettering, and the type kind of looks like ass in general (just looks like you picked a random sans serif typeface that came with windows)
I've seen worse as far as people posting logos on FP but there's definitely a lot of room for improvement.[/QUOTE]
What kind of font would you suggest? I'm terrible at choosing fonts.
I have got to say that these are WAY better than your first one, but I do also have to say that I feel you got inspiration from the one I submitted :P. (Not that it's a problem, I just like it when people use my stuff)
I'll post it again for fun:
[URL=http://img44.imageshack.us/i/topline.png/][IMG]http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/5415/topline.png[/IMG][/URL]
[QUOTE=Smeetin;19651165]I have got to say that these are WAY better than your first one, but I do also have to say that I feel you got inspiration from the one I submitted :P. (Not that it's a problem, I just like it when people use my stuff)
I'll post it again for fun:
*really big picture*[/QUOTE]
I totally did use some of your ideas and incorporated them into my own. Sorry for not giving you credit in the OP; it totally crossed my mind.
What does the company sell?
avoid arial: it should never be used, try a typeface like Univers, its pretty nice
[QUOTE=reeferdk;19652493]What does the company sell?[/QUOTE]
We break down computers and sell the hardware, among other technical goods on ebay.
[QUOTE=Master117;19652380]I totally did use some of your ideas and incorporated them into my own. Sorry for not giving you credit in the OP; it totally crossed my mind.[/QUOTE]
No need for credit, I wasn't trying to sound mean about it. I'm honoured you liked my idea. Even though I like it when my work gets used I am glad to see that you are dedicated to learning yourself. Good work.
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