Just some of my music. - General

Chocolate Covered Coma: [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Z-jKzR_HJg[/media] Jump: [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZkF8lZBQmZk&feature=channel[/media] Demon Baby: [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AmQVzhbYmfA&feature=channel[/media] Tell me what you guys think. Most of these are just products of boredom.

My face listening through the first song :geno:

I take it you think it's boring? Yeah... I'm no musical genius. I just wanted to get some criticism. Maybe some ideas on how to make it better?

[QUOTE=Okeydokeyman;20677508]I take it you think it's boring? Yeah... I'm no musical genius. I just wanted to get some criticism. Maybe some ideas on how to make it better?[/QUOTE] Needs more gay, not in a bad way it just needs more happy.

[QUOTE=Jimmymi;20677565]Needs more gay, not in a bad way it just needs more happy.[/QUOTE] Did you listen to the second song? It's pretty happy.

i can honestly say that i can't compare that to anything that i've ever heard. i can only think that it would work in a movie set in a futuristic city. i liked the second one, the others were kind of 'meh...'. it's good though, makes me wish i bought a synth when i had the chance.:smith:

pretty much every synth you use clashes with eachother in a bad way and follows the same melody far too similarly and just sounds very amateurish

[QUOTE=Rusty101;20680409]pretty much every synth you use clashes with eachother in a bad way and follows the same melody far too similarly and just sounds very amateurish[/QUOTE] Well, I am an amateur. But for which song did you mean this? I could see how it follows the same melody in the second one, but the first one is pretty different throughout. Third one just sucks. [QUOTE=mrhippieguy;20679618]i can honestly say that i can't compare that to anything that i've ever heard. i can only think that it would work in a movie set in a futuristic city. i liked the second one, the others were kind of 'meh...'. it's good though, makes me wish i bought a synth when i had the chance.:smith:[/QUOTE] Well, I'm not sure that's a good or bad thing that you haven't heard anything like it before. :v: Thanks though, I like the second one best too. I don't own a synth by the way. Clicking around in FL Studio's piano roll is pretty much the easiest thing ever.

Just started on another one. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c2Zt1akVn2s[/media] Tell me if you like it.

[QUOTE=Okeydokeyman;20714556]Just started on another one. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c2Zt1akVn2s[/media] Tell me if you like it.[/QUOTE] better than the others. piano roll you say? i should use beast more often.