After seeing many Drawings based on a long story made through interactions that users themselves decide, I've decided I want to start my own Interactive Story.
[img]http://a.imageshack.us/img192/1546/firstpersoninteractives.png[/img]
A note, the actual interactive drawings will or may not be as well detailed as this, this drawing took me an hour or so to draw, I plan not to waste too much time on the extreme details in each drawing, unless people want me to. The more detail I add, the less time and posts I will give.
In this interaction, you will be given a first person prospective, there MAY be few images I will draw showing in a non First person view, I will however keep it to a minimal.
Story: You are a heavily armored Military unit sent into an abandoned military bunker that had suffered a great war over 40 years ago. Many remnants of the war lay buried in destroyed corridors, and you appear to be after some information and data that is essential for your mission's completion.
The bunker appears to be abandoned, but you will soon find out that is wrong.
[img]http://a.imageshack.us/img192/642/militaryinteractivepart.png[/img]
Sadly, I have a few minor rules and requests for users who are posting on this thread.
- Please, do not use any of my images.
- Do NOT post anything considered offensive in any manor, way, or form, keep it clean.
- No trolls please.
[img]http://a.imageshack.us/img806/1546/firstpersoninteractives.png[/img]
You can also summon any military support to help aid you, including tanks, troops, and anything else that can kill things.
I believe I will be posting one image a day, and hopefully more, depending on the day.
looks pretty sweet, i look forward to this
[QUOTE=Retyuoligkl;23554371]looks pretty sweet, i look forward to this[/QUOTE]
My eyes are burning from all the time I spent drawing.
I take it that your primary language is not english.
The art is pretty sweet, a few things could be changed although I'm not going to bother you about that since this is obviously a high-effort interactive and I don't want to put you down. Continue with the style, it's very intriguing and I look forward to see this thread progress.
We should definiatly call out and see if there's anyone around.
Try to see what the cause of death was on that soldier too while we're at it.
Well your mission has changed considering that the building isn`t abandoned. Call HQ and tell them what`s up.
[QUOTE=Gregah;23554517]I take it that your primary language is not english.
The art is pretty sweet, a few things could be changed although I'm not going to bother you about that since this is obviously a high-effort interactive and I don't want to put you down. Continue with the style, it's very intriguing and I look forward to see this thread progress.
We should definiatly call out and see if there's anyone around.
Try to see what the cause of death was on that soldier too while we're at it.[/QUOTE]
So what do you suggest I improve on in-terms of the drawing?
Since you are the first to make an interaction, examining the dead soldier will be the next image.
[QUOTE=btang03;23554610]So what do you suggest I improve on in-terms of the drawing?
Since you are the first to make an interaction, examining the dead soldier will be the next image.[/QUOTE]
Well, gradient shading is 9 out of 10 times a big no no, although I have to say that I sort of like it this time around.
I'd say you should keep it simple with only two colours : The main colour and shadowing colour.
That way you can focus on shadowing first, when you're confident enough you can try highlighting :)
Shading in MS Paint is a pain, but if I'm going to get better, I shouldn't try to avoid it. The shading in the first Interactive drawing (3rd drawing at the bottom) was very sloppy, expect better shading, or atleast expect my next drawings to be improvements.
Yes you're absolutely right.
I fully expect you to be a MS Paint god when this is finished, these kind of things usually propell your artistic talents by miles because you're constantly drawing and what you're drawing is decided by an outside source, making you really push the envelope on what you can and can't draw.
Don't be afraid to take your time by the way, rushing an interactive only works the first few weeks because you're really psyched about it, but that goes away after some time and then you have this expectation on you (by the viewers and yourself) to still put out updates at a really high rate, and that can really take the inspiration away.
So take your time with the updates, it will go slower but you won't feel the need to rush it and we the viewers will have this piece of candy for a longer time :3:
I will post two images tomorrow.
Advanced options in inspecting the corpse:
Check the gun on the floor, see how much ammo is in it.
Check the blood on the floor, has it dried?
If anything unusual has been found, Radio command.
Also. Why does this remind me of Star Ship Troopers?
Shoot the very next person or thing you see in the face and kick it in the crotch.
Disregard special data, call some tanks and blow the fuck out of the HQ with them.
[QUOTE=Crossu88;23558310]Advanced options in inspecting the corpse:
Check the gun on the floor, see how much ammo is in it.
Check the blood on the floor, has it dried?
If anything unusual has been found, Radio command.
Also. Why does this remind me of Star Ship Troopers?[/QUOTE]
Seriously, do this...It's are best bet.
Sorry, I don't go on Facepunch often enough, I will however tell you to expect an image shown today based on Gregah's idea, and hopefully another image based off Crossu88's Interaction.
Lookin' good, btang. Can't wait to see where this goes.
[QUOTE=Gregah;23554517]I take it that your primary language is not english.
The art is pretty sweet, a few things could be changed although I'm not going to bother you about that since this is obviously a high-effort interactive and I don't want to put you down. Continue with the style, it's very intriguing and I look forward to see this thread progress.
We should definiatly call out and see if there's anyone around.
Try to see what the cause of death was on that soldier too while we're at it.[/QUOTE]
[QUOTE=Crossu88;23558310]Advanced options in inspecting the corpse:
Check the gun on the floor, see how much ammo is in it.
Check the blood on the floor, has it dried?
If anything unusual has been found, Radio command.
Also. Why does this remind me of Star Ship Troopers?[/QUOTE]
[img]http://216.130.185.107//media/7-24-2010/dY09Ha.gif[/img]
[b] You search the body, nothing of usefulness. You then contact HQ, you notify them of all the details depict in front of you. They tell you to continue your mission as planned, and to terminate any hostiles you encounter.
You expect more mercenaries ahead in your future, you tell HQ and they immediately send reinforcements to aid you.
They dispatch two other Special Operations troopers to your location to help aid you in your mission. Immediately then, the lights flicker, on and off, on and off.
You get a terrible feeling in your gut, and then, you hear slow footsteps.
You're not sure who or what the footsteps are from, or how many are headed your way. What do you do?
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I will be taking only interactions with specific actions that may help the mission, nothing random, and even if I don't select your interaction, I apologize.
Lay down in a pool of blood and pretend to be dead.
Unless there's somewhere to hide. Do that if there is.
[QUOTE=The Winner;23560247]Disregard special data, call some tanks and blow the fuck out of the HQ with them.[/QUOTE]
I'm sorry, but when you meant [b]"blow the fuck out of the HQ with them"[/b], did you mean call some tanks to destroy HQ? :wth:
Hide the body in the darkness, if the unknown noise is a merc, Pose as Sgt.peterson, you have the seagent symbol anyway,
[QUOTE=Crossu88;23582411]Hide the body in the darkness, if the unknown noise is a merc, Pose as Sgt.peterson, you have the seagent symbol anyway,[/QUOTE]
AND.... I'm drawing again. :)
Do I give you ideas and inspiration to draw?
[QUOTE=Crossu88;23587076]Do I give you ideas and inspiration to draw?[/QUOTE]
You're half right. XD
Let's do what Crossu88 said.
But damn I'm lovin' This thread!
Next pic plz?
[QUOTE=Crossu88;23607810]Next pic plz?[/QUOTE]
Delaying it. XD when I delay an image, expect the next upload to be more than 1 image uploaded.
Let btang03 take his/her time, drawing takes time.
[QUOTE=Gregah;23617794]Let btang03 take his/her time, drawing takes time.[/QUOTE]
What type of girl draws things like this?
I'm a dude by the way.
jewdozer draws some really fine gore and nudity, I know a few girls myself who enjoys drawing some really twisted shit and I'm pretty sure atleast one of them could think of drawing stuff like this.
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