Demented's Music

[demented]

So this past year or more i've been making music :)
But also a little scared to post it on facepunch because i'm
kinda sure you guys will flame me for it :(
But i think it's worth a shot now.

So i do use Auto tune in some of the songs because my voice isn't
Strong enough in some sections, i'm really not that great of a singer.
So that's just forwarning.

I do play guitar, piano and drums. But i don't nearly have the kind of
money to buy all the hardware to record. So i use alot of VSTI's
So it's not as real sounding as you ould like

LASTLY, My music is nowhere near the complexity you guys like.
I make popish music, so i'm hoping you guys can look past the
simplicity of it. It's just for fun, and i like trying to create catchy
little tunes :)

NOW, the music.

[url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/273183[/url]
- My Dream
This is an acoustic little piece with mostly orchestra inruments.

[url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/271459[/url]
- It's a New Day (WIP)
I don't really know what to call this one, it's more synth.
It's not finished and has alot of repetition

[url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/268752[/url]
- Stop The Time
ALOT more electronic and more mellow.
Voice isn't really strong in this one, so i apologize to
your ears aha.

[url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/234569[/url]
- Golden Love (WIP)
Not done yet, but this was a test if i could create
something pretty. I have no idea if i failed or not :(

[url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/251874[/url]
- Help Me !
Little Pop Punk song here. Voice isn't that strong here
except the chorus

[url]http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/228869[/url]
- Fucked You're Dad
Pretty little acoustic piece about having sex with someones
dad. It's nce.

So i know it's really not you're guy's cup of tea, But i would appreciate some helpful opinions :)

[MrJazzy]

You got a nice voice, but i think you have to sing a bit louder in some songs. Also, i think the songs sounds very much like eachother, perhaps it's just me.

[DOG-GY]

You have the uninterested voice syndrome.

You just sound like you're singing to sing and you aren't really into the music, IMO. Also, the music is REALLY generic, which doesn't help your voice, which isn't very standoutish at all. It's not something that I listen to and find interesting. Nothing that sets it apart.