• My first try at typography.
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I suck yes, but I enjoyed making it. [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cG7_2i7iPsM[/media]
Not bad, now just make is flip more and make my brain race to understand whats going on.
LOL, I will try to mindfuck you next time. :buddy:
huh i dont get it what's so special about this ? :downs:
[QUOTE=camper182;16583923]huh i dont get it what's so special about this ? :downs:[/QUOTE] Just a VERY simple typography.
Pirates of the Caribbean 3?
Everything in this video is wrong. The font has nothing to do with the sound clip at all, it's hard to read and has no impact. You simply chose 1 font somewhat fitting of the texture in the background that again, has absolutely nothing to do with the clip. There is no compositon, no font contrasts in any way (size, type of font group, colours etc). The setup for the text lacks (as said) composition, there is no logic at all in how it is setup, it's just cluttered and messy. You do not make us move with the text, you just make text pop up making us go "oh, text there, let's read it".
[QUOTE=dgg;16584624]Everything in this video is wrong. The font has nothing to do with the sound clip at all, it's hard to read and has no impact. You simply chose 1 font somewhat fitting of the texture in the background that again, has absolutely nothing to do with the clip. There is no compositon, no font contrasts in any way (size, type of font group, colours etc). The setup for the text lacks (as said) composition, there is no logic at all in how it is setup, it's just cluttered and messy. You do not make us move with the text, you just make text pop up making us go "oh, text there, let's read it".[/QUOTE] Well thanks for the C&C :blush:
Well, it's good for a start. This guy has a lot of typography videos, you should probably look at how he does them, or see how the font fits etc [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NCt2nZF2nLk[/url] [editline]01:07PM[/editline] wait no i think it's this guy [url]http://www.vimeo.com/1612411[/url]
It's alright for a first try, I guess. But like I said in the other thread, you kinda of need to make it flow more, and maybe have an object or other text for it to be based on? It seems a little odd just floating there in the middle of the page.
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