[img]http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/4468/ulyssesgardner.jpg[/img]
How do you all like it?
needs more work, and less "i'm coming for you", IMO
what's it for?
I like it, except for the strange text and flare in the background looking a bit ugly.
[QUOTE=gothiclampshade;25361998]needs more work, and less "i'm coming for you", IMO
what's it for?[/QUOTE]
Some project she wants us to post our creations on her website i wanted to check with facepunch before i posted it on hers for a grade.
What does it say? >_<
sorry what does it say?
Terribly obnoxious black and white radial gradient background.
"Im coming for you" is grammatically wrong. No apostrophe and the c in "coming" is capitalized for some obscure reason. Unfitting font and the text just blends out to the dark part of the gradient.
"BTISK" (?) is an unreadable tangle consisting of random lines, gradients and colors.
In short; This isn't even remotely good in any way. It's terrible and I have no idea why you even decided to create a thread for this.
[QUOTE=kevlar jens;25362426]Terribly obnoxious black and white radial gradient background.
"Im coming for you" is grammatically wrong. No apostrophe and the c in "coming" is capitalized for some obscure reason. Unfitting font and the text just blends out to the dark part of the gradient.
"BTISK" (?) is an unreadable tangle consisting of random lines, gradients and colors.
In short; This isn't even remotely good in any way. It's terrible and I have no idea why you even decided to create a thread for this.[/QUOTE]
Its not BTISK its my real name masked (Ulysses)
But some of my classmates think it looks good.
It needs work i'll put it that way
For example, that black text is just awfull, it's out of place, seemingly meaningless and looks like a pretty basic font.
Like wordart on a powerpoint presentation, if you will
My advice is that if you want to keep that subititle, at least recreate it in the same style as the title.
Also that gradient is quite bland, I'm no artist so I'm not entirely sure how to fix it.
But don't give up, i'm sure it'll look great in no time
I don't.
Will provide some concrit when I'm less drunk.
Now, Ulyssess Gardner. This image isn't amazing. Looks like something I would make at 12. Your teacher at Lanham Christian School won't be happy.
But yeah, for the background go background to layer, gradient overlay, radial, black to white, adjust until it looks good. Give that useless text under a nicer font or ditch it and make your text look better than a chopped up graident.
To be honest. I don't like it. Needs a lot of work. The black text over the white doesn't clash well and the blue over the white don't clash well. The messy text just looks weird. Needs blending and lighting effects.
EDIT: What does the messy text say?
FUCK RIGHT OFF.
Photoshop crashed as I was about to finish off a remake of this...
That sucks. :ohdear: Have a heart!
now here is what i did:
[img]http://cl.ly/2nkG/content[/img]
Ok, so toned down the graident bg and make it.. nicer.
Redid the text using the pen tool, shits vector.
Grunged up some helvetica and made it look shitty because thats what all you hipsters want
Took me around 17 minutes and I wouldn't hand it in without changing some of it.
Learn from it, and don't hand it in as your own. If it is, ill be in touch with Lanham Christian School.
Fuck about with it, its yours. Download it at [url]http://cl.ly/2nSm[/url]
That makes me feel really good inside Im really famous!!
Did I get the right school?
[QUOTE=codenamecueball;25365833]Did I get the right school?[/QUOTE]
No but nice try using my 2 year old facebook info :smug:
Andrew Fraser Perry and Bearsden Academy lol
Argh!
That looks shitty.
Line
Shape
Color
Value
Texture
Dominant and subordinate relationships
Contrast
Learn those.
[QUOTE=kevlar jens;25362426]Terribly obnoxious black and white radial gradient background.
"Im coming for you" is grammatically wrong. No apostrophe and the c in "coming" is capitalized for some obscure reason. Unfitting font and the text just blends out to the dark part of the gradient.
"BTISK" (?) is an unreadable tangle consisting of random lines, gradients and colors.
In short; This isn't even remotely good in any way. It's terrible and I have no idea why you even decided to create a thread for this.[/QUOTE]
Oh damn you just laid the smackdown
Kinda amateur, but better than I could do! Keep working!
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