This Is Disgusting - General

[b]Welp, i think it's finally time for me to release this, i worked on it for a week then put it away and told myself i would add more later, but i didn't, so here it is. whatever. [/b] [img]http://i37.tinypic.com/k99qw2.jpg[/img] say what you need to say and stuff. you can get semi full resolution here [url]http://jcplf.deviantart.com/art/Disgusting-140849736[/url]

Cool stuff JC. Way better than the first version you showed me.

Already posted my comment on it on DA. But great work again :P

This is sick dude. Permission to use this?

Those skullz proportions are completely wrong =/ But still, the whole picture looks kick ass man :buddy:

I see organs and muscle but nothing disgusting.

[QUOTE=Xerios3;17925698]Those skullz proportions are completely wrong =/ But still, the whole picture looks kick ass man :buddy:[/QUOTE] I told him that!

[quote=xerios3;17925698]those skullz proportions are completely wrong =/ but still, the whole picture looks kick ass man :buddy:[/quote] well maybe they just have really tall faces >.> lol who rated dumb.

It is fucking beautiful teach me

I really like the way you shaded the skull. Not too fond of the random light spots here and there on the rest, but overall it looks pretty sweet. It's also so shiny you can't possibly find it disgusting.

Crazy concept creature man. By the way what happened to your mod status?

[QUOTE=xamllew;17951540]Crazy concept creature man. By the way what happened to your mod status?[/QUOTE] He wasn't on often enough to moderate the forums.

[QUOTE=xamllew;17951540]Crazy concept creature man. By the way what happened to your mod status?[/QUOTE] Too laid back about being a mod I think. [QUOTE=dgg;17949228]I really like the way you shaded the skull. Not too fond of the random light spots here and there on the rest, but overall it looks pretty sweet. It's also so shiny you can't possibly find it disgusting.[/QUOTE] ok yeah i donut know what I was thinking with the random light spots hehe.

..Is it... still alive? :ohdear:

YOU ARE A MISTAKE OF NATURE. [URL=http://img40.imageshack.us/i/datsoldier.png/][IMG]http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/2629/datsoldier.png[/IMG][/URL] But seriously though, amazing picture, loving the detail put into the area between the skulls. Have an artistic.

Pretty cool, kools.Some things i'd like to mention, the muscle definition is pretty sweet, but the skulls anatomy are pretty off. Unless they're meant to not be human looking, then i'm sorry. Refer to this : [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/6257/critiquer.jpg[/img] 1. First off, the teeth are really, really huge, mostly for the guy on the left, but the one on the right still has big teeth aswell. 2. Guy on left, has one smaller eye than the other. 3. This is pretty much for all eyes/EYE SOCKETS, they are called eye sockets is because they are the part of the face that goes in, and sinks behind the cheek bone, what you have, is the cheek bone denting inwards too for all those eyes. Look at any reference for a skull and you'll notice how the cheek bones protrude outwards right next to the eye socket. 4. Something with your coloring/highlights. It seems you have a highlight there that you probably used white to create or eventually ended up with white, then shaded it with black/grey or something darker, to tone it down a bit, because it's under some sweet cast shadow of the skulls, which is kool. But doing it like that caused the white part to turn grey, instead of a darker tone of muscle. Same with some other various highlights you seemed to darken after you already made them white. 5. Nose cavity is waay too low here, You got the placement perfect on the left guy, but the guy on the rights nose is too low. 6. There is a random hole in the guy on the lefts cheek bone, I don't really know what that is meant to be. Doesn't really look like it's broken and you made it like it's part of the skull, which is kinda wrong, because that hole doesn't really exist, there is a similar hole although, right under the zygomatic bone/arch, which connects the jaw, there is a hole there, maybe that is the one you drew, but in wrong placement. 7. Alright this thing is more or less just subtlety, You have one light source as i can see, which is clear and nicely portrayed. You have several highlights placed throughout the body which is cool, but two of which, one on the right, and one on the left seem to be at almost the exact level of brightness. Your light source pretty much looks like its coming from the top right, which shines down harder on the muscle on the right, which should create a harsher highlight than the one on the left, which needs to be toned down, there we will have a nice subtle value of shading transition as light turns to dark on a form presenting a nicer and more 3d visual. That's all i have to say with critique. Great piece even with a few flaws, it's still pretty great. And good job on the slime/muscle detailing/shading, they are pretty sick

My self-explanatory critic =) [IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/k06cn4.png[/IMG]

what did you use to create that image ?

Hey, i didnt plan on sleeping :D

[QUOTE=TrueWolF;17962694]info that i will definitely take into account [/QUOTE] [QUOTE=Xerios3;17963162]Info that I will definitely take into account[/QUOTE] fuck yeah. now THESE are critiques. everyone take down notes. Though I can't ass myself to change it because i'm a lazy bastard, I will definitely take these words / image of wisdom and apply them as I create more and more creative creations. thanks guys.

Holy fuck!! That is really well drawn. People say you should draw the teeth like that and that, but I think the f*ked proportions add to the surrealism and horror of the picture. But yeah there is some lightning you could improve here and there but thats it :D

[QUOTE=k00lwhip;17965721]fuck yeah. now THESE are critiques. everyone take down notes. Though I can't ass myself to change it because i'm a lazy bastard, I will definitely take these words / image of wisdom and apply them as I create more and more creative creations. thanks guys.[/QUOTE] This is why you are one of the only artists on fp that I will offer my critique too. Have fun with it :) also, Xerios, your skulls are a bit off too :3:

[QUOTE=TrueWolF;17970191]This is why you are one of the only artists on fp that I will offer my critique too. Have fun with it :) also, Xerios, your skulls are a bit off too :3:[/QUOTE] what's this? xerios? off on his proportions? i'm gonna go check the temperature on hell.

well he was just doing a quick mockup, I woudn't expect it to be flawless, you yourself could just check it and compare with a real skull image. you'd see the errors too i'm sure.

[QUOTE=TrueWolF;17970789]well he was just doing a quick mockup, I woudn't expect it to be flawless, you yourself could just check it and compare with a real skull image. you'd see the errors too i'm sure.[/QUOTE] I know that they are bit off, just like you said it was just a quick mockup. The purpose of it was to show the basic form of a skull ( crap, I wrote s[b]c[/b]ull in my pic ) Anyways, the moral of dem storiez iz : "Get some damn reference pics before starting drawing whatever you want to draw" :3: