• 3 white on black portraits
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Figured I may as well share this with all y'all. [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/9462/kylar.jpg[/img] [img]http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8053/dad2t.jpg[/img] [img]http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/4936/michealm.jpg[/img]
The second one was awesome.
Good shading, you just need to learn proportions of the face. What bugs me most is the size of the last person's nose, and the size and placement of the first person's mouth. The nose seems a bit large and the mouth is supposed ot be closer to the nose then the chin, here it is right smack in the middle.
[QUOTE=1chains1;19960208]Good shading, you just need to learn proportions of the face. What bugs me most is the size of the last person's nose, and the size and placement of the first person's mouth. The nose seems a bit large and the mouth is supposed ot be closer to the nose then the chin, here it is right smack in the middle.[/QUOTE] I agree with the mouth on the first one. That was the first real portrait that I've done from life, and I don't think it looks as good as the other two. The last guy's nose is actually that big though. No kidding.
Good job.
Very good, but the first one seems...flat compared to the other two.
Last one has downs, doesn't he?
[QUOTE=johanz;19963696]Last one has downs, doesn't he?[/QUOTE] What? No.
You should post a picture of the last guy.
Shading's good. Material definition is really nice. But you fucked up with some things. First one the facial features are all over the place. Second looks like he's missing half of his head and for the third one the head his huge and nose is even huger. Keep the tables and proportion sheets near you when you draw the next time or use the grid method if you're drawing from images. Did you use models, drew from head or used images?
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