Updated NO-LIFE Cover (I got a lot of help from our school's art teacher)

[Swilly]

This is the original
[url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=871155[/url]
Very crappy, haphazard and atrocious.....
Here is the new one and I actually don't think I could make it better :D

[IMG]http://i94.photobucket.com/albums/l110/germansoldier555/UpdatedNoLifeSketch.jpg[/IMG]

[cercerd]

Truthfully I think its a step down, if not a different style altogether. That is more cartoony.
Also, although I myself am no expert at anatomy in drawing, although most of your proportions are ok, the most obvious thing is the fact that he seems to have rickets in his right arm (it bends).
The shotgun could use some detail, and the stock is either too long, or the wrong shape, depending on what kind of stock its meant to be. Other than those few flaws, it's a good drawing, and sure you have potential.

PS, listening to your teacher somewhat changed your style, although teachers can help, don't let them completely change your entire style (unless your style is piss awful (which yours was not)), at least, that's what I heard.

[Negrul1]

Seriously, the old one was better. It was more dynamic and 3d, wheras this is static and flat. Also what cecerd said about the anatomy.

[Swilly]

I think the zombie added and logo added the depth but the human was horrible...I hated it

[sOmEcRaZyGuY]

You're going to have to spend a lot more time on this and see how you can improve it, it really needs tons of improvement to be honest.
Look at other drawings/sketches of a human character to get a better idea of how to add details and such.

[lintz]

Your teacher helped you with this?

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Aren't art teachers supposed to be good at their job?