• Citizen Erased - Project x4-i7.0003 - Final
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THREAD MUSIC!!! [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HiHUKVoYbdc[/media] After some effect editing and tweaks here it is. First true digital landscape and city and such. Let me know what you think. [img]http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/170/b/d/Citizen_Erase_by_Henson9227.jpg[/img] Progress Thread. [url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=955363[/url]
I really really like the lighting.
hah thanks
Seems like there is a lot of bloom rape there.
That's really good, I have the artistic talent of a Cod, so.... totally jealous.
You need to add some music to the thread... *wink wink*
The only thing that's really defined is the grass, everything else looks blurry. The lighting looks really wrong, like, there are shadows in places where there shouldn't be shadows, and the lack of any sharp lines really makes it even worse. The idea is good, the composition is good, the lighting, lines and the person's anatomy need work. His neck looks too long.
[QUOTE=$$>MUFFIN<$$;22746395]You need to add some music to the thread... *wink wink*[/QUOTE] [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HiHUKVoYbdc[/url] :)
Decent for a first, but it lacks a real focus and perspective. Keep trying though, knowing you you'll improve lots. :D
Nice, you using a tablet?
nope all on a mouse. haha. I've never done to well with perspective without a ruler. so kinda of a fail.
It hurts my eyes to look at, why so blurry??
[QUOTE=Bustah;22756924]It hurts my eyes to look at, why so blurry??[/QUOTE] to burn your eyes because of the feeling and light power.
Lower some blur and make it not so bright. Otherwise awesome.
Filter rape, bad human proportions, bleak midground, the city lacks style; looks like gray squares with lights on top of gray squares with lights, and all around sketchy construction. It's good for a first though, just need to lighten up with the corny after effects.
[QUOTE=david927;22763264]to burn your eyes because of the feeling and light power.[/QUOTE] I lol'd hard. Fair enough.
god that fucking music it hurts
[QUOTE=Sirdangolot5;22763925]god that fucking music it hurts[/QUOTE] good sir i might have to kill you. i give fair warning
sorry the middle part isn't so bad but when I posted I had only heard the beginning noise
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