Therai Sunspring - A character's backstory. - General

Themesong: [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vJT6fuCRr5w&feature=view_all&list=PL89C1B3A3780E9C08&index=0[/url] Place of birth: Somewhere in Kalimdor, before the sundering. This would describe his wisdom. Name: Therai Springsun ( Nickname: Silencer ) Unique about him?: He really doesn't give a shit if you shoot him with an arrow, he'll just start bleeding madly and make a stand. He usually fights to the death, and isn't scared to lose a battle. He does what he must to keep the peace. Also, this man would be known to nap occasionally, it's heard that he likes to keep in pristine quality for fights. A man should never be tired for fighting. Now, we get to business. Teenager years: As a teenager, Therai was plummeted into the forests of the mighty land of Azeroth. He learned that to survive, he would need to master what he did so well as a child, bonding with creatures, crafting bows and arrows. He'd daily make an arrow, and if he could during his days, which if he were not busy with collecting food for himself, he'd make an extra arrow. As he progressed in making arrows greatly, he learned the tricks and trade of the poisons he could brew from herbs, what beasts liked what kinds of meats or whatever that was available, and much more to deal with the wilderness. This boy was not the wilderness, but slowly becoming it's master when Nature was passive, yet when in a rage. This teenager would constantly be fighting for his life, as he did not know everything, he couldn't. Therefore, he slowly progressed out of his teenager years, with no friends to say. It was quite the miserable times for him, as no one cared for him. Who ever startled him, usually ended up with an arrow to the head, for this boy highly disliked people who would break his stealth into the trees, grass and bushes of the land. As he was alone, he knew nothing of love, nothing of friendship. He merely learned to kill those lurking, and those lurking were bent on killing the teenager who had ruined the life's of many poachers, druids and more alike. He was never cared for from the time he was nine, this would explain why Therai feels nothing when killing innocent people, who'd merely be bystanders, but not to him. Enclosed in his world, he saw fit that he stay alone, and when alone, he was safe. When surrounded, he would be dead. And when in the middle of a bloody forest, an master waiting to be angered. Early Adult years: As the boy grew up, he was wandering often into Elven controlled territory. And so, he decided to find out why so much noise was coming from such a strange place, as you may know this elf had never knew what a city was. He approached the first gates of the land, where they gladly accepted him in. He was a High-elf then. He merely wondered the forests, looking for a place to settle down. When this did not very much help, he resorted to the city of Silvermoon. And so did this elf of nature finally did make his way into the city, a grand and yet almost far too elegant one to say. As soon as he got into the streets with his makeshift clothes, he was stared at. Most elfs had lived a fantastic life, but not Therai. He came into the city, and was approached by a recruiter. When the recruiter asked for his place of birth, the elf said "The forest, and that is all I know." This amused the recruiter to the point of taking him to one of the higher ranking officials, but nothing more then a Noble. At the time, Therai was quite confused, because nobody had every accepted him into their homes when he had seen them. He didn't even have gold to spend. And so, this noble had accepted him into his family, to be a ranger when his training was complete. And that training in the military did not last long. 23-25 Years of age: As a young ranger in that time of his life, much changed. He learned many ways of making arrows, different kinds. He learned his own history, and somewhat of his past before his so called teenage years. Yet, as he served into the military. He missed his days of roaming free, having no responsibility except for one, and that was to keep himself alive. He missed such times, and so he asked for a honorable discharge from Silvermoon's rangers. This happened, and he still did wear his ranger armor, as a way of showing that he was happy to serve. Yet, in the days while serving, when he was almost done, and could return to be a civilian. He was quite the uneasy, as he did dislike having to follow strict orders. He very much despised this, and left in order to leave that so called military, and the whole kingdom. As he was making his way back to the forests, something he heard caught his attention. The Scourge were invading, as to the fact he'd never heard of any Scourge, he basically didn't care. And continued to take his most trusted route through the forest. As he was walking through the forest, he had learned somewhat before most other Elf's of the Fel magic. He had slain a necromancer who wasn't watching his back, and Therai decided to take a few books. It's a work in progess. I'm not asking for people to go LOLOLOL it's great. I just want honest opinions.

LOLOLOL it's great.

[quote]This boy was not the wilderness, but slowly becoming it's master when Nature was passive, yet when in a rage.[/quote] what?

This rivals Tolstoy.

lol

Same as before. [quote]A couple of things seem quite contrived Why is he so accepting of others? it mentions very clearly that he doesn't care about other people and raised himself in the forest since he was nine, yet he was happy to serve in the military (then he wasn't, what?), actually when he went to silvermoon and was approached by a recruiter, he seems to speak perfectly normally (unusal for someone who was alone since prepubescense) It's also paced very badly, it jumps around a lot (it mentions how he still wears the military armor as a show of pride, but then afterwards says how at the end of his service he wanted to leave)[/quote]

Excellent roleplay. I'm very impressed. Well done.

[QUOTE=Nyaa;30856157]It's repetitive. He likes arrows and is a hunter I get it. I've read the books from Warcraft and play WoW. And since that story is very amazing it surprises me why you would make up this kind of boring character when the world of the story of Azeroth offers you much more. You're also not very good at writing in general, so it's hard for me to like your character when I have to force myself to finish the text. [/QUOTE] [editline]3rd July 2011[/editline] In my opinion this doesn not deserve it's own thread. It is only one work with no indication in the title or OP that there will be more and this isn't anything amazing so it really doesn't deserve a thread. In my opinion.

[h2]Name:[/h2] Emperor Takeshi [h2]Place of Birth:[/h2] Feudal Japan (this would explain why he was once an emperor) [h2]Unique Trait:[/h2] Emperor Takeshi was once the emperor of Feudal Japan. Now he's just a normal high school student, dealing with the pressures of every-day life! Being Emperor never prepared him for this! [h2]Teenage Years:[/h2] Emperor Takeshi waited patiently for his father, Emperor Takeshi, to die, so that he could assume the throne and become Emperor. Young Emperor Takeshi was always doing royal Japanese things, like leading warbands against monks, and convincing shamed warriors to ceremoniously gut themselves. Yeah, the young Emperor certainly had it pretty good, but life wasn't ALL fun and games for little Takeshi, as his father had decided he was to marry a high-ranking general's big ugly daughter to secure political ties or something. Emperor Takeshi certainly did not want to marry this girl because one time, as a joke, her classmates cut holes in her kimono right above her nipples, and ever since people had been calling her "Nipple-Bitch (only in Japanese)." No, Emperor Takeshi most certainly did not want to marry anybody named Nipple-Bitch, but such is the life of being the son of an Emperor. [h2]Adult Years:[/h2] When Emperor Takeshi's father, Emperor Takeshi, killed himself out of shame for having a daughter called "Nipple-Bitch (a fact he discovered only after it was too late)," it was the young Emperor Takeshi's time to shine! He assumed the throne and started doing [i]all kinds of royal shit[/i]. Yes, things were pretty darn awesome for Emperor Takeshi and his big ugly wife. Feudal Japan continued being Feudal Japan under his rule. He made almost no difference in anybody's life but his own. He was pretty insignificant, as far as emperors go, but he was still emperor, so... You know, shit was pretty cash. [h2]Aged 45[/h2] Everything was awesome for Emperor Takeshi until one day he pissed off [i]the wrong wizard.[/i] He was thrown like a million years into the future (or however long ago Feudal Japan was lol I don't even fuckin know) into MODERN TIMES. Emperor Takeshi quickly discovered that being the Emperor of Feudal Japan didn't help him at all in modern Georgia! Unsure of what else to do, he started attending public high school, and got into all sorts of wacky adventures! Unfortunately, the school bullies viewed Emperor Takeshi as a [i]bit of a nerd[/i], and always made fun of him! They called him rude names like "Emperor Ta-cry-baby," and "Butthole Takeshi." So maybe life ain't [i]so[/i] perfect for Emperor Takeshi anymore, but he's learning to love it anyway! I mean, hey, that's just the cost of being a normal, every-day boy, which is all he ever wanted anyway (aside from being emperor). :) If you ever wanna roleplay, hit me up. [editline]4th July 2011[/editline] Shit, I forgot the theme song. Here, I attached it below for you: [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/24770615/EmperorTakeshiSong.mp3[/url]

[QUOTE=Big Dumb American;30905443] Shit, I forgot the theme song. Here, I attached it below for you: [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/24770615/EmperorTakeshiSong.mp3[/url][/QUOTE] Sweet

[QUOTE=Nyaa;30875446][editline]3rd July 2011[/editline] In my opinion this doesn not deserve it's own thread. It is only one work with no indication in the title or OP that there will be more and this isn't anything amazing so it really doesn't deserve a thread. In my opinion.[/QUOTE] Don't you remember what happened when someone posted one of these things in Creative Work? Everyone was like what do you want from us! [editline]6th July 2011[/editline] Wait, it was this guy wasn't it [editline]6th July 2011[/editline] And BDA, I see that everyone seems to love you, but I think you're a [i]crap[/i] satirist So there

it was this guy

Wait, it was THIS STORY as well, what the hell [editline]6th July 2011[/editline] I think I see what you were getting at now Nyaa

[QUOTE=Big Dumb American;30905443] If you ever wanna roleplay, hit me up. [editline]4th July 2011[/editline] Shit, I forgot the theme song. Here, I attached it below for you: [url]http://dl.dropbox.com/u/24770615/EmperorTakeshiSong.mp3[/url][/QUOTE] Oh this is what we're doing now. [h2]Name:[/h2] Nyaa Notselfinsert [h2]Place of Birth:[/h2] Boland [h2]Unique Trait:[/h2] Can defeat a Berman by eating shrooms and hallucinating. [h2]Teenage Years:[/h2] Nyaa Notselfinsert was being awesome in Boland until the Becond World War started and Boland got fucked by Bermany. She was doing that whole angst thing until her parents got killed by a bomb, then she became a Barry Sue and killed all the Bermans and saved the world from Bitler before she was even 18. [h2]Adult Years:[/h2] She pretty much screwed around while still remaining a virgin of the holy Beavens and produced many holy children. Never got any std's either. She's awesome like that. [h2]Aged 45:[/h2] Nyaa's titties got saggy so she decided to have herself magically aged back to teenage years and transported to Georgia. Can't wait to RP with you guys. ThemeSong: [url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QH2-TGUlwu4[/url]

I'm kinda glad but also a little sad that Flameliker stopped replying.

I like the part where you say he has fought to dead many times :P Other than that, looking great :)

Sorry about necroing this, but i'm glad the last two people can kind of respect it. Edit: I use a different alt.

Flameliker here, this is my other alt. I'm moving this into the creative writing thread.

[QUOTE=Zarjk;31390345]Flameliker here, this is my other alt. I'm moving this into the creative writing thread.[/QUOTE] Ok.