Digital Art Portrait of a Friend. - General

fuck it. Close thread, thanks for Positive comments :)

Haha, she better be better looking.

Thanks for the constructive criticism.

It's eating my soulsadjkfnkasas

Good job, we scared op.

"I now knight you Edja007 the Threadcloser!"

Anyone saved the OP?

[QUOTE=Spiky;15929625]Anyone saved the OP?[/QUOTE] How to open firefox cache?

What the hell did you guys do. :o

well that's nice

i wanna see :(

It was nice. I disliked the teeth shading though... That's about it. OP was a decent portrait of a girl possibly in her 17-18s. Mostly grays... Think... a less elaborate work of TrueWolf's portrait. No offense @ Angry baby. @ OP - Why not bring the pic back? It won't get worse than what you got in the first few replies, plus, if you can't cope with critics, for good or bad of it, then I don't think art is where you want to be. There's always going to be some cracks about your work, anywhere. (That and people editing your pictures to contain penises. :v:)

I too wanna see... And Bugga is right..

i wanted to see =/

Ohh i want to see :(

This thread is fucked, and OP is never coming back to FP

exactly, OP got the shame of his life and should be coming back with an alt if he cares enough.

It's Reposted.

[img]http://pontiphex.com/images/tattoo_fail.jpg[/img] See what's going on here?

Did it take you like three hours to finish the shading of her upper lip?

kay.. all i can say is that, the line detail is too detailed, giving her a bit more age, also, the shading is extremely blurry. Usually when going all out on teeth, it gives it a bit of a weirder look. so try to make them a bit more subtle.. remember your teeth are inside your mouth, they will be darker from the shade, but in this case the girl seems to have light shinning directly onto her teeth so i think it's k. so do this.. reduce the opacity on the teeth a bit, Look at the picture, and you can see they all are close to each other, the thick outlines you have inbetween the teeth you drew make them look seperated. also lessen the detail around the eyes, and focus on the detail in the eyes.. and sharpen up your shadows a bit. and also with the shadows, you have quite a few missing shadows that are making the piece lose proper shape.. make the reference in b/w and compare with yours which shadows are where and missing. Also the upper lip on your piece is completely gone.. which makes it look like she' curling her upper lip back to expose her teeth which looks a bit weird.. the upper lip is darker than the rest of the face so darken it up a bit to show that it's there. hope that helps.. also thanks for reposting :)

Not even traced well

Thanks for the repost! Now, in addition to what TrueWolf said. You made her eyes smaller which in turn made all of her other features bigger giving her a more manish appearance... Furthermore, the face is more shading and less lines... its hard to make a good looking face with only lines. try using more tones and really paint it. also, this pic would be even more tough cause you can't really tell that she has any hair... obviously we know its in a bun or whatever... but that would be tough to portray in a painting. keep working on it, in any piece if you keep going back and reworking it it should get better and better, assuming your getting the right guidance :P [editline]04:43PM[/editline] btw, good luck with the girlfriend biz :P

Thanks for all the POSITIVE posts.

Thanks for removing it from the forums

[QUOTE=Angry baby;15929270]fuck it. Close thread, thanks for Positive comments :)[/QUOTE] Stop being an "angry baby". Just take criticism and try to improve on it.

Anyone save it?

Damnit. Post it already. We know some of you saw it >:U

It wasn't a big deal. He had a reference picture and a drawing. The way he did the teeth made it kind of look like a guy as well as the fact that her hair was in a bun.

there's no need to post it again i think.. he got the critique he wanted, and then ppl started makin fun of it.. so he took it off. let the thread die lol.