• A MARSOC chillin (pencil
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[img]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Marsoc.PNG[/img] Yeah he's just chillin' dher' C&C please. -~*JPEG VERSION*~- [url]http://filesmelt.com/dl/Marsoc.jpeg[/url]
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refresh page it works when I did that just a sec I'll upload a JPEG
oh wow, refreshing [i]did[/i] work. haven't seen that before :raise: anyways, interesting drawing, though it feels unfinished. The detail in his camo pattern is very sharp, whereas a lot of things are still very sketchy. Balancing things out so they don't contrast like that is a good skill to work on.
Pose is stiff, back curve appears to be missing, torso is misproportionate towards the rest of the body. You are scared of drawing faces. Thumb looks more like a rubber didlo than a group of muscles and bones, shading is too simple and feels uncomplete sometime, smoke is quite shitty, background is oversimplified. some errors here and there with the gun, mostly prespective and angles. Barrel goes all wrong. You spent too much time and effort on the pattern, rather than defining other, more important parts of the drawing. Folds on the scarf are halfassed. Helmet is skewed through many dimensions. Material definition is quite bad, goggles look like they're made out of kevlar, while theroetically it would provide quite a cover, it doesn't just work in reality. Your anatomy seems to have been improved somewhat. And the camo is impressive as always. You should just spend more time doing other more important things, like material definition. Camo's edges are also too defined, it'll get all the attention and steal the show. Cosnult tutorials on topics mentioned. Do tutorials atleast a few times.
HURKKKKK Well if it helps anybody most people of the special forces don't use their belt in their loops they keep it slightly bellow the waste I need to work on the fingers... thanks for the C&C guys!!
Looks great.
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