I'd like some criticism on my first song, an electronic piano nonsense - "Absolutely"

[skoinks]

Oh wow, this feels strange. Well, after some hassle I finally got Fruity Loops and this is the result of a few days of hard work, I guess you'd call it. Anything you tell me, negative or positive will be appreciated.

[media]http://soundcloud.com/skoinks/absolutely[/media]

[Platinumcs]

Needs some EQing for sure.
See 1:22 for example, there are two basslines occupying the same frequencies and it sounds like a couple of bears with explosive diarrhea in a fight to the death
Otherwise there are definitely some good musical ideas in here, keep at it frend :)

[meepy]

Around 20 seconds, you change the volume instantly of the piano to be the background and have that heavy bass come in. I really like the chords you have going on with the piano and think they should be brought out a little more. Same thing at 0:58, but it doesn't need as much adjustment.

[Croix]

There are lots of problems, but here's a pretty good tip: Hipass anything that doesn't absolutely need the low frequencies. That way you won't get insane subbass and bass spectrum problem.

Oh and always hipass anything before you put it in a reverb at 100hz. Sub 100 hz reverb will really fuck your shit up