Chinook with a load - General

its not finished but i think its postable I'm not the best drawer but i might do the metrocop from Half life 2. or dog. reqs anyone? [IMG]http://filesmelt.com/downloader/DSCF1158.JPG[/IMG] C&C?

Quite bad and unproportioned.

[QUOTE=johanz;16929514]Quite bad and unproportioned.[/QUOTE] shut the fudge up [IMG]http://www.minihelicopter.net/CH47Chinook/CH-47%20Chinook.jpg[/IMG]

[QUOTE=TheXeon;16929590]shut the fudge up [IMG]http://www.minihelicopter.net/CH47Chinook/CH-47%20Chinook.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] yeah it looks nothing like that bad and just bad

[QUOTE=TheXeon;16929590]shut the fudge up [IMG]http://www.minihelicopter.net/CH47Chinook/CH-47%20Chinook.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] Well he's right.

the origonal photo is massive, whats the "make small and click to make big" button called?

[QUOTE=noodleboy200;16929758]Well he's right.[/QUOTE] this, If you can't even be bothered to make the lines on the very simple box below it straight, it might not be worth posting yet.

[QUOTE=TheXeon;16929808]the origonal photo is massive, whats the "make small and click to make big" button called?[/QUOTE] It's 600x746 pixels, not big at all. But yeah it needs some work.

"Alright yeah, that's- nah it's a pretty good job!" -Scout

[QUOTE=TheXeon;16929312] I'm not the best drawer[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://www.akkafurniture.com/images/00_8_Drawer_1.jpg[/IMG]

Buy a new box to load stuff in it looks like its going to break.

maybe its a organic one? one without bars to keep it in.

If you can't accept criticism then posting in the creationism corner isn't a good idea. Stop putting up a front for reasoning about why certain things look strange and accept the fact that you need practice as you said yourself.

i know im just saying thats what type of bag it was.

[QUOTE=TheXeon;16961095]i know im just saying thats what type of bag it was.[/QUOTE] and there's your inability to take criticism kicking in again

[QUOTE=Uber|nooB;16961357]and there's your inability to take criticism kicking in again[/QUOTE] wat is rong wif u is gd drawin ffs wanker

Let's see: -That bar on the side slants down too much, it looks like you tried adding perspective but slanted both the top and bottom lines down at equal angles. The top most line should slant down more than the lower line to give a sense of depth. -There are four sets of wheels on the chinook picture you posted, you only drew three, not that big of a deal though. -Shadows are uneven. When you draw, pick a light source before you start drawing or else if you start shading randomly it'll look weird. -The box's 3d shape looks strange, the line closest to the foreground should be longer. -There strange differences in definition between sections of the helicopter are probably because it's a WIP, so sort that out. -I'd suggest making the outline of the object first before adding in details and heavier lines because if you want to change a detail or erase it it'll leave a smudge. -The blurring is okay but make it more circular. At this point the blur lines seem to be coming at jagged angles rather then the circular motion a helicopter's blades rotate in. - This is when you start getting close to the finish: -Make greater contrast in the shading. The bottom is really light right now, so when you're almost finished Darken that alot, unless you settle for the light source to be right under the helicopter. I remember when I used to draw like this, keep practicing. Maybe start again on a new sheet of paper.

This is a load.

This was not what I was expecting. At all.

[QUOTE=Reaver1991;16964177]This was not what I was expecting. At all.[/QUOTE] Same here. I thought it was going to be something completely different.

[QUOTE=TheXeon;16929590]shut the fudge up [IMG]http://www.minihelicopter.net/CH47Chinook/CH-47%20Chinook.jpg[/IMG][/QUOTE] Look at tiny, eency, weency man, running from criticism!!