• Solar System
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So I made a solar system. [img]http://img7.nettby.no/users/t/o/m/tomatmann/files/planetary.png[/img] C&C much appreciated :)
looks pretty nice, I cant help feeling that the edges are too soft, needs some stars and shit too.
Lol that's almost satirical. I'd provide C&C, but there's not much to work with. It's basic, cliche, and doesn't really do anything for the viewer. Keep trying though, practice :)
The bright side of earth is far too big, the other planets are kinda ok. (Make the bright side only to the half) And aswell stars etc., fill the black spots more.
You've got too much 'blank' space to the right. The picture looks incomplete, but other than that it's pretty cool.
The far sides of each planet are too dark. They look like they just disappear. Make the shift to pitch balck more gradual. I'll try and use one of my old works. [media]http://i352.photobucket.com/albums/r342/icypenguin01/Ball.jpg[/media] Look at the earth in the top right. You might want to try adding a slight glow to the whole planet, like it has a light source behind it. It just makes the planet look more round, not like a semi-circle.
That's a small sun.
Thanks for the comments :) That blue planet isn't suppose to be earth. It's an alien planet. [editline]11:12AM[/editline] [QUOTE=Within;18435787]You've got too much 'blank' space to the right. The picture looks incomplete, but other than that it's pretty cool.[/QUOTE] It is incompleted.
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