My attempt at making a music collage with beat box.

[Obe1kenobi]

This was all done with layering video, it's the first time I have tried this so I know it's pretty rough but I thought you guys might want to hear it anyway, let me know what you think, if you have any constructive criticism.

[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ukTbeep908[/url]

It was supposed to say "music collage" I guess that what happens when you don't read over things before posting.

[k00lwhip]

One thing you really want to pay attention to is timing, if certain sounds are not timed in the right way and all on the dot and on the mark it just sounds like a really laggy collaboration of sounds. The slightest notion that a beat or a mark is off makes it sound like it was put together really quickly.

Also, like one of the youtube comments, the rice really drowns out other sounds.

Remember, when singing, the voice is the main instrument, all others are simply accompanying.

[flandre]

Doesn't quite "flow".

[Ronin]

Fixed the title for ya, now to hear what you got.

For the video, try having two different sets, rather than just splicing it all into one. And try to really dial in on the rhythm and the timing.

Otherwise it isn't bad at all.

[lexus04]

it was off in some places, get a better mic

[cryticfarm]

tuning of voice is way off

[Matix]

Um... I'm surprised to be the first to say this, but that was shit.

[Monty Pie-thon]

Why did you remove the video?

[lexus04]

because backpedal