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Linkt to DA: [url]http://goatsilla.deviantart.com/art/Portrait-of-Christine-180231470[/url]
Had a small 4x5cm photograph as reference of her.
Comments are welcome. :smile:
Is that a wart or a piercing?
[QUOTE=Ascensive;24998152]Is that a wart or a piercing?[/QUOTE]
piercing.
you're afraid of darker tones, the neck seems to be wide enough to cover distance from Pärnu to never, neverland and material definition is horrible or lacking, I can't decide which. But that wart problem persists. Eyes are stupid undetailed and clothes are the skin :psyduck:
Also hair on right side looks like it's at angle instead of being round like hair is so I'd say shading failure. Tits look weird and haven't been defined, that lonesome line between boobs is all that hints us of their existance.
You need softer pencis and to lay off smudging.
Drawspace.com has some cute tutorials about values and shit and for material definiton do some studies from real life.
Actually I think his scanner fucked up the colors.
I think its really good :downs:
She looks like a cartoon character.
With downs.
Mind posting the actual reference picture you used? I wanna see if she actually looks like this.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;24999363]you're afraid of darker tones, the neck seems to be wide enough to cover distance from Pärnu to never, neverland and material definition is horrible or lacking, I can't decide which. But that wart problem persists. Eyes are stupid undetailed and clothes are the skin :psyduck:
Also hair on right side looks like it's at angle instead of being round like hair is so I'd say shading failure. Tits look weird and haven't been defined, that lonesome line between boobs is all that hints us of their existance.
You need softer pencis and to lay off smudging.
Drawspace.com has some cute tutorials about values and shit and for material definiton do some studies from real life.[/QUOTE]
The whole drawing doesn't have many detail, it would look pretty weird with full detailed eyes and the rest rough. It's a good base drawing, you have the main shapes done, for now it's good to keep it soft and light so I don't agree with the critique about darker tones, it's good practice to keep things balanced and light in the start. As you move on you add detail and darker tones, I do agree that smudging is very bad tough..
The proportions seem a bit off in some places, you may want to look into that.
she uuuuuuuuugly
[QUOTE=Tampio;25001213]Actually I think his scanner fucked up the colors.[/QUOTE]
On a greyscale pencil drawn picture?
[QUOTE=Tampio;25001213]Actually I think his scanner fucked up the colors.[/QUOTE]
What colors, exacly?
Use darker values.
[QUOTE=Kurtzund;25022803]Use darker values.[/QUOTE]
Or you lower your brightnes on your monitor, because it's fine here on my monitor, configured for print products, which doesn't have to mean that the strokes look perfectly black or something. If I darken it up in photoshop, stuff gets dirty.
I can see that the hair is made with H-line pencils.
Oh and by the way thanks to shading nose looks misaligned, should loosen it up a bit around the nose.
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