• Tovip's thread of art stuff
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the female face on the first one looks mangled
[QUOTE=Lazore;23942303]the female face on the first one looks mangled[/QUOTE] I know i suck at drawin females (if someone could point me to a good tutorial it would be nice)
You did your Deviantart link wrong. Anyway, I think you should post the bunny one, I like the appeal.
[QUOTE=Lazore;23942303]the female face on the first one looks mangled[/QUOTE] [IMG]http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/9082/sunset2.png[/IMG] i tried to fix up the face a bit but something still looks off... cant point it out though [QUOTE=JoeyZ;23942562]You did your Deviantart link wrong. Anyway, I think you should post the bunny one, I like the appeal.[/QUOTE] Thanks for that. uhhh..... you wouldent know how to fix it would you? edit: Ahhh i just noticed all my links are broken?!!?!
Only write your name, not the link in the box
the face looks much better! maybe add some lines to the hair?
[QUOTE=chamon;23943001]Only write your name, not the link in the box[/QUOTE] Thank you kindly sir [QUOTE=Lazore;23943036]the face looks much better! maybe add some lines to the hair?[/QUOTE] Yha maybe but something about the shape I think I may have to redo the face completly because I think the problem is it looks to child like.
[QUOTE=Tovip;23943120]I think the problem is it looks to child like.[/QUOTE] It looks fine to me.
Shading is very cheap and gradienty.
[QUOTE=edja007;23944006]Shading is very cheap and gradienty.[/QUOTE] yha im still working on shading XD but I cant think of any other way other than making transparent black lines (as far as photoshop goes) Edit: just added some higlights in her hair [IMG]http://img12.imageshack.us/img12/1780/sunset3.png[/IMG]
You made it more hoorrible. It was nice and minima before, that had atleast some appeal. You can't do human anatomy for shit, you should use skeletons and break shit down into shapes, and contentrate more on measuring proportions rather than pulling random lines and hoping that will do. Your shading is absolutely nothing. Cheap ass gradients in random spots with no sense or hope for future whatsoever. Practise alot more on pen and paper, follow tutorials and use some reference images once in a while. And using that brush to do grass is for womenly, girly men. [editline]09:20PM[/editline] Atleast you have good, happy ideas.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23965991]You made it more hoorrible. It was nice and minima before, that had atleast some appeal. You can't do human anatomy for shit, you should use skeletons and break shit down into shapes, and contentrate more on measuring proportions rather than pulling random lines and hoping that will do. Your shading is absolutely nothing. Cheap ass gradients in random spots with no sense or hope for future whatsoever. Practise alot more on pen and paper, follow tutorials and use some reference images once in a while. And using that brush to do grass is for womenly, girly men. [editline]09:20PM[/editline] Atleast you have good, happy ideas.[/QUOTE] I don't see anything wrong with the anatomy, looks like a girl and guy should.
hands.
[QUOTE=3v3ryb0dy;23965991]You made it more hoorrible. It was nice and minima before, that had atleast some appeal. You can't do human anatomy for shit, you should use skeletons and break shit down into shapes, and contentrate more on measuring proportions rather than pulling random lines and hoping that will do. Your shading is absolutely nothing. Cheap ass gradients in random spots with no sense or hope for future whatsoever. Practise alot more on pen and paper, follow tutorials and use some reference images once in a while. And using that brush to do grass is for womenly, girly men. [editline]09:20PM[/editline] Atleast you have good, happy ideas.[/QUOTE] could you point me to some good shading tutorials? or maybe suggest some techniques? I was going to re-edit some of the calender ones but I can't seem to find the .pdf
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