• The Boy in the Car {Story}
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[B]"The Boy in the Car"[/B] You are in your car on a long trip to see your distant cousins. The path becomes beaten and worn it get dark quicky something is wrong. Your father got a bit drunk before the trip so his driving is shitty. You are afraid of staying in the car. Suddenly, Your Father Passes out because of Alcohol withdrawel. The car swerves over the road into a corn field your dad wakes in the fright. theres no sign of the road you're stuck... A old farmer comes out nowhere and inspects the car, he has a double barrel shotgun with him. Scared for your life, you dive out of the door and sprint into the distance. Two short and sharp blasts in the distances, Your heart skips and beat and time seems to stand still. You run with all your life and run and run! you end up in the middle of a dark cave afraid and the enterance is nowere to be found? You Place your hand to your left arm, it suddenly hurts. You look at your hand and it's covered in Blood! You'd been shot! A small glimmer flickers in the middle of the deep wounds, writhing with blood, you look closer and notice the shape of a bullet. You pull at it with all your streangh and it comes out blood with it. you scream in agony Your screaming made Thousands and Thousands of Bats fly down from the Ceiling. It seems this cave was bigger than you thought. You realise something, bats usually fly towards the entrance when startled and decide to follow them. You go for what seems miles in agony because of your arm. there is no exit in sight. your lost... You shout "Echo!" and try following the echo, you turn right a tad, and go forward... You stumble and trip. You fell down a hole! Well done genius. Fortunately, the hole was not very big and fell into a puddle of water, you realise that water usually gathers near the surface of caves, so you must be close to the surface. You see a light in front of you you follow it with lust to find an exit... It turns out to be a hole, but it's too small for you to go through, you have to find another way out. You Poke your head through the hole because it can fit. You see that there is a magnificent garden infront of you, Children are playing and mothers are proudly watching. You shout through "HELP!, HELP ME!", but no one can hear you due to the children laughing and screaming A little kid looks at you, confused by you, a dark evil glint in its eye appears and all of the others stop and look at you, red eyes blazing... You shout "Someone get an adult", but the kids look even more evil... You realise you must have stumbled into Hell, Though this is only one section! You gasp and look away for a second, when you look back, everything seems to have returned to normal, maybe your eyes are playing with you again. You run from that evil hole and don't stop you feel as if you aren't controlling your legs... You continue running, when you suddenly trip and the same hole starts sucking you in. As Gravity gets confused, your arm gets dislocated. Fuck. Now you only have 1 arm to work with and that has a bullet wound in it. You eventually pop out of the top of the hole, the children and their parents have changed, now looking like small red demons accompanied by larger demons in a firey prison You scream but hear nothing where have you come? WHERE?? The demonic children start stumbling towards you. ohshutohshutohshut. The demons suddenly dissapear into a cloud of red dust, a much larger demon with a long, forked tail appears, accompanied by a clothed person with a scythe, you realise this is the devil and the grim reaper. "Why am I here? what have I done?" you say. The larger demon, without moving his lips says in a deep grumbly voice which echos of the walls... Nothing. Not one word. You hear absolutly nothing... You feel like someone is talking to you, like something... or someone is talking to you, but no one is You loose the feeling of being on the ground you look down to see all but black. you look back at were the demon was.... all but black... Then suddenly, you see the world on the day of its demise, the sun eats the earth. You hear an old man mutter "400 million years existance, and for what?" Your mind is put in a different place from your soul, your mind appears in the Earth's demise, but your soul is in the Earth's birth The pictures placed in you soul of people playing having fun are gone in the last breath of the Earth. You shead a tear for this is a day of sorrow. The tear drips down onto the earth in its death throes, and it splits it down the middle. Pschadellic colours drip out and you realize: That the colours drip upwards, as if to crawl up worlds, you appear in the car seat, your father says "Whats up son", To which you reply "N-nothing?" "Don't worry everythings gonna be all right" He replies, A evil glimmer in his eyes, You are in your car on a long trip to see your distant cousins. made by me dbuhos dragonspawn ubermunchkin trifon technolgic and evilmuffin. :v:
-Snip cuz gta told me to-
[img]http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/4166/52649255.png[/img] I love this image.
:gonk: but its epic
No it aint.
Go back to the PW hole where you live kommrad
:crying:
Oh dear.
[QUOTE=trifon;24648038]Go back to the PW hole where you live kommrad[/QUOTE] Neh, I'm good. rated dumb AND bad reading. Because it was bad reading.
Afraid I didn't like it much, kind of cliched
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