Some Anime fanart

[Flameo]

'Kay, some of these are really old.
But I thought I'd post them anyway seeing as I've not been on this forum in months.
[I](Reference images were used for some pictures, I just love colouring stuff in.)[/I]

Latest:
[img]http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/845/yuifinished.png[/img]
[url=http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/2889/yuilineart.png]LineART[/url] | [url=http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4515/yuisolid.png]Non-Shaded[/url] | [url=http://flam3o.deviantart.com/art/Yui-Hirasawa-Guitar-130419797]DeviantART[/url]

[I](Not [img] tagged to save space, not in any order neither)[/I]
[url=http://i44.tinypic.com/105cytj.jpg]Keion! group[/url]
[url=http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n289/flameo123/CharacterAlone.png]Mio Akiyama[/url] (I actually made a wallpaper from this one, but I'm not very happy with it, so I'll leave it)
[url=http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n289/flameo123/Neku.png]Neku -TWEWY-[/url] (When I first changed my shading style)
[url=http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n289/flameo123/Grenadierr.png]Rushuna[/url] (Huurah for boobs?)
[url=http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n289/flameo123/Kagami.png]Kagami[/url] (I couldn't draw eyes or hands properly, also used to shade like Anime shows are typically done)
[url=http://i115.photobucket.com/albums/n289/flameo123/MikuColoured.png]Miku[/url] (Still couldn't draw eyes or hands, kinda looks like a dude dressing as a chick. O.O)

[RedPanda]

Possible shit-storm inbound.

[Flameo]

Because it's Anime, yea?
If so, then I just wasted a lot of typing all that out. =/

[RedPanda]

FP is very anti-anime, yes.

[ZombieFleezus]

You can always post this in Fast Anime,Also these are good.

Also i watch Anime and i never say it because of shit-storm.

[chunkymonkey]

[QUOTE=Flameo;17224919]Because it's Anime, yea?
If so, then I just wasted a lot of typing all that out. =/[/QUOTE]

Not necessarily, post it here:

[url]http://www.facepunch.com/showthread.php?t=806836[/url]

[ZombieFleezus]

I BEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.

Not really.

[RedPanda]

Hey I like anime too.

and yes I forget about the anime sub-forums.

By the way, these are pretty good.. The perspective on that guitar changes after the neck though.

[Flameo]

Thanks, and yea I see what you mean about the Guitar neck. I'll maybe try fix it if I somehow ever find the motivation to go back to such an annoying drawing.

Anyway, I guess I'll maybe post them in the Fast Anime thread later on.

[RedPanda]

I would just remember to keep the same perspective better on the next piece.

[chunkymonkey]

[QUOTE=TheMercWithAMouth;17225043]I BEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.

Not really.[/QUOTE]

True, but I posted a link.

[abigserve]

Her right arm is fucked, the perspective on the guitar neck is fucked, and I hate anime. That said, it's still very well done and a good idea. Props broski.

[Denoxide]

I like it. Good job.

[Perfumly]

I'd say that the drawing is good but I'm not a fanime of anime.

[Flameo]

Okay, thanks for at least replying anyway.

[dgg]

[QUOTE=abigserve;17226422]Her right arm is fucked, the perspective on the guitar neck is fucked. That said, it's still very well done and a good idea. Props broski.[/QUOTE]

Pretty much this. I also dislike how the bottom hair goes a lot to the side rather than down.
It has good quality but has some technical flaws, also you should try and shade manually by picking colours yourself and shade more properly according to the shapre rather than using dodge and burn or just a single 0% hardness colour for shading.

[Parrky]

new guiter design

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???

[chunkymonkey]

[QUOTE=dgg;17230706]Pretty much this. I also dislike how the bottom hair goes a lot to the side rather than down.
It has good quality but has some technical flaws, also you should try and shade manually by picking colours yourself and shade more properly according to the shapre rather than using dodge and burn or just a single 0% hardness colour for shading.[/QUOTE]

Her right arm looks fine to me other than the fact that it looks like she had carve out a section of her chest right under her boob so that it could be in that position.

But hey, I'm no artist.

[Cyteless]

It's very good, even though I'm not a fan.

[daviddorn]

I've actually seen that anime, haha. Great job, you also designed out her outfit? because I don't remember it in the anime.

[B]edited:[/B] One thing I would change though is put down her right leg. It doesn't need to be in the shot and since it is it looks a little weird.

[Flameo]

[QUOTE=Parrky;17230720]new guiter design

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Pretty incredible design, yes?

[QUOTE=daviddorn;17230877]I've actually seen that anime, haha. Great job, you also designed out her outfit? because I don't remember it in the anime.

[B]edited:[/B] One thing I would change though is put down her right leg. It doesn't need to be in the shot and since it is it looks a little weird.[/QUOTE]
For some parts, but I found a picture of a real girl wearing someting similar.
So I used that for a main reference.

Anyway, to the criticism.
Thanks, I'll try change some of the things on it later today or just try improve whatever drawing I do next, same with the shading, etc

[mynames2long]

The guitar's neck is in a very wrong angle, but otherwise it's awesome!
Also the strumming hand looks wrong too

[dgg]

[QUOTE=chunkymonkey;17230783]Her right arm looks fine to me other than the fact that it looks like she had carve out a section of her chest right under her boob so that it could be in that position.

But hey, I'm no artist.[/QUOTE]

It's going wrong, the reason for this is that the guitar neck is bent unnaturally, so the arm has to bend unnaturally in order to reach it.

Going into detail of why it's wrong is kind of hard to put down in words. At least without a big fucking wall of text.

[3v3ryb0dy]

It's pretty sexy, but the guitar part all the way left looks like it's bent. Needs bigger bend on the lineart.

[Vince323]

it's better than anything I could do, but your lines are somewhat rough

[Kinglah Crab]

I like it.

<Insert comment about the guitar neck being bent here>

[yellowoboe]

Not bad.

[Badunkadunk]

Is her left eye missing the white part on purpose?

[Flameo]

[QUOTE=Badunkadunk;17250224]Is her left eye missing the white part on purpose?[/QUOTE]
Nah, just a stupid messup.

[Fire Kracker]

[QUOTE=Flameo;17250258]Nah, just a stupid messup.[/QUOTE]

That's happened to me

alot

since it's hard to remember the eye after you do everything else