My new song it is called "Z.O.G." - General

I had the idea to make a song with some conspiracy theory references and here it is Also I know you're going to hate on this johan_sm so FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >:( [media]http://soundcloud.com/d-cep/z-o-g[/media] [quote]yo, i got the heat rocks...terrariums finna invade your whole nation...aryans you like rap music? here's some rap songs, cherish em all the other rappers hella past gone, carrion all the other rappers hella past gone, carry em put em in a casket, bury em oh you still think they nice though, what the fuck, marry em! talkin coupla couplets i got more than a pair of em way you rappin couldn't front more it's embarrassin how you got more whores than there's doors on a caravan norcal hoodies i'm a northern american blowin like tires on a ford like harrison rappers say they robbing hoods, course, they arrogant i would say they friar tucks or maid marians or tame variants, watered down, disney swagbergs puttin out a hotter sound isnt he i'm an emcee, rabbi, griot known san jose all the way to the t-dot ZOG reptilians perched on the heat rocks cheap ass rappers gettin merked when the beat drops ZOG reptilian, perched on my heat rock killin em, i don't even smirk when the beat drops ZOG we get it done yesterday extra paid, blue and white banners on the escalade yall don't even know about my bilderberg escapades heck you weigh? infowars suckers gettin pepper sprayed goin like a hurricane blowin through the levies esto para mi gente, cohens and the levys weak cats step up in my zone and bein petty i think yall be on some kid shit, ponies at the ready turn fluttershy into glue, i'm remorseless a reptile, get wild, soon you'll be corpses madoffs and abramoffs, doomsday enforcers who wins elections, only whom we endorses ayo, i am fly truly fork tongue blacker than an imi uzi[/quote]

It was alright.

Your voice makes me sleep.

I would love to listen but I can't find it in myself to appreciate the genre :\

Harsh I guess I'll have to rap more about people from Facepunch

Probably that, yeah.

aw cman man dont play me liekt that bro its been a half hour mane cman man. Seriously though I posted a song a while back and it took days before I got a substantial amount of feedback on it, give it a while. Also threatening to rap about people because they don't like something you made is funny in a sad sort of way. EDIT: Annnnnnd I forgot. I say this to a lot of vocalists, but you need to up the intensity of your voice. Right now it's mostly droning in one pitch, all the rap I can remember hearing is a lot louder, and aggressive, with more pitch alteration. I'm sure it might be the sound you're going for but it can get unbearable if it's too monotonous and relaxed. You don't have to yell, but it certainly couldn't hurt to turn down your input to compensate for the levels and rap louder/harder. Just sayin.

Tryna be Das Racist :c [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=594ofaA4T0s[/media]

I liked it, the beat especially.

omg noa :3:

I thought it was cool The lyrics seemed to flow nicely

u should rape about how The Liberals are taring apart Are Country...

[QUOTE=TH89;29647559]Tryna be Das Racist :c[/QUOTE] Well then you're fine, nothing to fix if it's what you want. [QUOTE=Penis Colada;29648613]u should rape about how The Liberals are taring apart Are Country...[/QUOTE] yes this ths this/

Your vocals are way too high in the mix, and i'd boost presence a bit more and take down on the bass, you have a fairly deep voice. It was okay.

sounds a bit like uk grime. good stuff though mate.

It's pretty cool, beats nice and your flow's great but I think you need a lot more expression in your voice, it's pretty monotone.

This is fucking awesome The monotone made it even better IMO, loved the "doors on a caravan" thing lol

Rapping was adequate, the track was pretty wicked, exposed the lyrics to be the star of the show. Only criticisms I can give was that there wasn't a huge amount of enthusiasm or emotion of any kind in the lyrics, and that the clap sound was awful.

me gusta TH89 Somehow made me think of; [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8MZZP1PBU5s[/media] Was it inspired by this? [editline]8th May 2011[/editline] Part that I was reminded of starts at 2:00. [editline]8th May 2011[/editline] [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bFdgv7FJnUE[/media] Better version.

[QUOTE=Natrox;29693705]me gusta TH89 Somehow made me think of; [media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8MZZP1PBU5s[/media] Was it inspired by this?[/QUOTE] Nnnnno, not sure how this is similar :v: