I'll take your criticisms or opinions here, I haven't done a lot of standup yet, but I feel like this set went pretty well.
[url]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_LMDwffEDFY&feature=plcp[/url]
Was funny, except you gotta memorize them jokes and stories. but once you get that down, the material was pretty fucking good, and your presentation is fun.
Not half bad, slow it down, and like above memorize your stuff.
Keep it up!
if you really have to use a paper, make it part of the act. Also don't act so nervous and interact just a bit more with the public, even if it's just a "how are you doing" or some rethorical questions
Slow down a bit, you seem really nervous. Make sure you take your time and speak clearly.
[QUOTE=No Party Hats;36687087]Was funny, except you gotta memorize them jokes and stories. but once you get that down, the material was pretty fucking good, and your presentation is fun.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for saying so. I need to keep doing the material enough until I can memorize it, the joke structures are pretty wordy and long, I wouldn't use notes if I didn't really need them.
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[QUOTE=MaroonMak;36720227]Slow down a bit, you seem really nervous. Make sure you take your time and speak clearly.[/QUOTE]
That's what I'm hoping to be able to fix.
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[QUOTE=D3TBS;36712265]if you really have to use a paper, make it part of the act. Also don't act so nervous and interact just a bit more with the public, even if it's just a "how are you doing" or some rethorical questions[/QUOTE]
I just use the notes because the material is new. If I can do the same set another two or three times, I won't need the notes any more.
And it didn't really occur to me to talk to the people, I figured it'd be safer to stick to the stuff I'd prepared. That's a good point, though, I'll try and be friendlier this week.
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