My final project for my intro to animation class.
[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1-d2jUeQh5I[/media]
at 0:03 the pinky looks like a cock, otherwise very good
Very good, smooth. Though the plot was a bit foggy :P.
[QUOTE=Smeetin;19677249]Very good, smooth. Though the plot was a bit foggy :P.[/QUOTE]
A lot had to be cut out from the original story boards, so I could actually finish it.
[QUOTE=Uberslug;19677206]at 0:03 the pinky looks like a cock, otherwise very good[/QUOTE]
Honestly that's what you focused on?
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lol he took it all in
Well the video stopped loading at 0:03 so I just kind of took it all in
no homo
Even if this thought was misplaced, the first thing my mind jumped to while watching it was "generic art school film". I couldn't help but imagine another short film I saw once that was black and white, with one woman in the frame frowning, until the very end when she was dead on the floor, with "Fin" displayed afterward. It also used an extremely similar piano piece.
The actual animation was great, though. You managed to make the coloured portions feel significant with me, at least. Most attempts at that fail on me, which is odd since I can't really pinpoint what causes that.
Anyway, the only thing I felt was out of place was the lack of shading on the body of the man, but that was probably a conscious decision and not a problem.
I thought it was great, certainly better than what I can do.
So in the end the dude shot himself and not the chick?
Awesome, if not a little cliché.
Did she have aids?
Shoud of fucked her before dying.
[QUOTE=agun;19681732]Did she have aids?
Shoud of fucked her before dying.[/QUOTE]
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The muzzle kept flashing on and off.
TOO LAZY TO DRAW IT, I THINK.
Didnt like the face of the boy, otherwise good.
That was actually pretty good, good work :buddy:
That's like really good. I don't think most people realise how much effort goes into something like this.
[QUOTE=Jimbojib;19685573]The muzzle kept flashing on and off.
TOO LAZY TO DRAW IT, I THINK.[/QUOTE]
I was running out of time, and didn't notice that mistake...
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[QUOTE=Alfacow;19686582]Didnt like the face of the boy, otherwise good.[/QUOTE]
It was based off my face. :(
Also... It's hard to draw faces... they are very sensitive; you move one line a millimeter downwards, and it look entirely different
Truely lovely! I'm on my second year of multimedia, so I only get a very small portion of animation. I figure that's what I'm mostly interested in, so I might see if I can take up an animation course next year.. In anycase, I can really appreciate how much effort and work that small video must've taken! And you're real good at your drawrins, well done : D Liked it alot, unusual. Very smooth animation!
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