• Doing a Comic in MS Paint
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So I'm doing a comic called "Commissar's Calling" in Ms Paint on the MSPA forums. It's about Warhammer 40k and I need some art/story tips so I can improve. All the drawings (except for like 1 panel) are done in ms paint so I figured why not post it here? Comic can be found [url=http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?42132-Commissar-s-Calling-A-Warhammer-40k-Adventure] Here [/url] Here's the character roster that I've drawn so far: [img]http://i.imgur.com/RUH4N.png[/img]
Your characters look REALLY good. You should totally make a flash game instead. lol.
Everything is really pleasing on to the eyes and well drawn. Except for those damn black lines on the first-lefts boots. That's a kick right in the OCD.
The boots get changed... but the lines never go away. I've wanted to change them since day one, but at the time I was ass at drawing boots (which I have since gotten slightly better at) and I can't really be assed to go back and change it since my whole sprite page is made up of the good Commissar in those boots. Ah well, wardrobe change sooner or later. They're less noticeable on a background so that's something.
Very aesthetically pleasing, but it needs more spess mehreens. See that orc? Make the shoulder pads nice and big and round and hmmnnmmm... Huh? Right. You might want to use a reference or something, some of them are awkwardly posed.
I'm intentionally not including space-blands because they're bland. They're also bald, which is boring, and bland. Did I mention they're bland? They may show up at some point, but only to make fun of Matt Ward's terrible writing.
Wikipedia claims he is either a musician or lacrosse player. The game designer doesn't even appear in the disambiguation. They dare to orphan him!? Wikipedia needs to be put to death for its heretical transgressions!
No, that means Wikipedia has good taste. It would be Heresy to include him.
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