I made this for a signature for a forum.
[img]http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/2319/sigfe.png[/img]
The arm of the dying guy sucks. So does the background.
C&C?
The small finger looks kinda odd, and the head also looks kinda odd with the angle it's at.
First thing that came to mind is that it's a little too big for a signature. Anyways:
The directions of the shadows are inconsistent and the right guys body doesn't flex right.
The fire looks like a transparent blanket, there's also some anatomy issues throughout the image.
Colouring doesn't leave anything out, which is good (no unnecessary white spots) and the WJ looks like a WJ.
It is the dimention limit for the forum the sig is for.
*sigh* I guess i need moar lighting practice.
Can you explain the fire? you mean how you can see through the fire and onto the hand? That was deliberate.
Gregah, can you explain what make the head look odd? For constructive purposes?
And a box?
To get your figures right use ref pics. Thats how we all start. The drawing figures from mind comes with practice.
[IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/108fpj9.png[/IMG]
Well about the head...
I think the chin is to forward. And if you want to make him look angry open his mouth more. I've posted two pictures you could use as references.
[url]http://i46.tinypic.com/a4vecl.jpg[/url]
This is a picture of my hand you can also use as a reference.
If you were shooting fire out of your hand I imagine it would burn really close to the skin at first before it fired.
I imagined it like this:
[IMG]http://i50.tinypic.com/dy0ysi.png[/IMG]
Oh and the guys left tit is smaller than the right. Since the left tit is closer to the screen it should be bigger. If you have a camera and a self timer you should take pictures of poses with yourself, that often helps me.
And because you were so nice in my thread, I made a quick sketch of corrections (but keep in mind I'm also not a perfect at drawing, this is just a representation)
[IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/zvvrl0.png[/IMG]
Oh and if he's shooting the guy, or was when he was still alive, he should have been looking in to the direction he shot at. And the eyes are round but they are supposed to be hidden under our skin so i guess your eye should now look like this:
[IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/b9hj4j.png[/IMG]
I think you should spread out the fingers if you want to use the littlefinger like that, since it is impossible to keep three straight fingers (ring, long and index) and still bend the little finger like that without support from your thumb.
[QUOTE=jewdozer;19681368]To get your figures right use ref pics. Thats how we all start. The drawing figures from mind comes with practice.[/QUOTE]
[url=http://www.posemaniacs.com/]This[/url] helped me a lot.
[QUOTE=Nyaa;19681725][IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/108fpj9.png[/IMG]
Well about the head...
I think the chin is to forward. And if you want to make him look angry open his mouth more. I've posted two pictures you could use as references.
[url]http://i46.tinypic.com/a4vecl.jpg[/url]
This is a picture of my hand you can also use as a reference.
If you were shooting fire out of your hand I imagine it would burn really close to the skin at first before it fired.
I imagined it like this:
[IMG]http://i50.tinypic.com/dy0ysi.png[/IMG]
Oh and the guys left tit is smaller than the right. Since the left tit is closer to the screen it should be bigger. If you have a camera and a self timer you should take pictures of poses with yourself, that often helps me.
And because you were so nice in my thread, I made a quick sketch of corrections (but keep in mind I'm also not a perfect at drawing, this is just a representation)
[IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/zvvrl0.png[/IMG]
Oh and if he's shooting the guy, or was when he was still alive, he should have been looking in to the direction he shot at. And the eyes are round but they are supposed to be hidden under our skin so i guess your eye should now look like this:
[IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/b9hj4j.png[/IMG][/QUOTE]
Wow. This is great. Very helpful.
And yeah, forgot that your little finger won't bend like that when you have other fingers straight. Durr.
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Err, I want to give you a heart and a wrench. I'll give you a heart since you already have a wrench.
:D
You should post the next version so we can see what's up :D
me?
Yeppers
Alright. I'll use Nyaa's guidelines, and improve the background greatly.
I finally found time to start working on this. I got the hair and body and arms, but I still need the hand fixed up and the sword. And the other person's arm.
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