• Mod Website - An old KGB Document
    11 replies, posted
[url]http://www.ivans-secrets.com/[/url] I just made that for my mod, it's supposed to be an old KGB document somebody found, and sent to a reporter (with annotations). Tell me what you think :v:
It's pretty good man.
Looks amazing. Glad to see you're still working on your mod. It's been quite awhile now. I wish I had some criticism, but it's fantastic.
I don't like the font, too smooth to be hand drawn. Maybe you should try a typewriter font instead? And it's pretty disorganized.
Yeah, it's just supposed to me a big mash of different notes jotted down :v:
I like it, it's a little complicated but I guess it adds the feel to it. I just want to make a comment, the annotations, though that is a very good font, really lack on looking hand drawn. I think I've made this comment somewhere on these forums before, but whenever you are trying to do something hand drawn, then go ahead and do it hand drawn because the minor discrepancies of having fonts (having letters look the same, having font being measured) takes away from the overall piece.
It looks really bad whne you do it by mouse though
It looks pretty good on the visuals. I just say though that it looks rather messy and unorganized and minus points for taking the HTML template right out of Photoshop.
The annotations totally don't look hand-drawn.
[QUOTE=Tu154M;18402771]It looks pretty good on the visuals. I just say though that it looks rather messy and unorganized and minus points for taking the HTML template right out of Photoshop.[/QUOTE] I'm not really a webdesigner, I have no idea how to automatiaclly resize it for smaller resolutions :(
Get someone with a Tablet to do the font.
I think you should actually make the physical thing and take a photograph, it would look a lot better.
Sorry, you need to Log In to post a reply to this thread.