[video=youtube;r4f6K12wbbM]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4f6K12wbbM[/video]
Hey guys! Since face swapping is all the rage right now, my friends and I decided to make a short about it. We shot it in an afternoon, and finished the post production in about 4 days. Hope you enjoy this silly short! And as always, feedback would be greatly appreciated. :)
I'm sorry but this was extremely awkward to watch
[QUOTE=Petrussen;49853743]I'm sorry but this was extremely awkward to watch[/QUOTE]
I'm sorry I made you feel awkward. :(
this is pretty well put together
This has such a 2008 vibe
[QUOTE=Petrussen;49853743]I'm sorry but this was extremely awkward to watch[/QUOTE]
iunno dude i thought it was p funny :v:
The idea was alright, but the execution was somehow lacking. Maybe try to shorten the video and make the punchlines less predictable.
I liked the idea and I thought the acting/framing/composition was okay. It just ran on a bit long and there were a few awkward pauses.
I'd suggest either cutting bits where nothing much is happening and making it into a shorter, snappier video or putting more jokes in to justify the time length.
[QUOTE=Zyler;49857487]I liked the idea and I thought the acting/framing/composition was okay. It just ran on a bit long and there were a few awkward pauses.
I'd suggest either cutting bits where nothing much is happening and making it into a shorter, snappier video or putting more jokes in to justify the time length.[/QUOTE]
Thanks for the feedback Zyler! I'll definitely take those notes into consideration on my next project!
[editline]3rd March 2016[/editline]
[QUOTE=PHrag;49857468]The idea was alright, but the execution was somehow lacking. Maybe try to shorten the video and make the punchlines less predictable.[/QUOTE]
Appreciate the critique!
[QUOTE=geogzm;49855626]this is pretty well put together[/QUOTE]
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it
What really sells it for me is the limited dialogue. So many youtube videos are full of really fast talking now and it's refreshing to see some visual-centered videos
I think the thing that hurt it most for me was the audio. The few voices that were in there were obviously ADRed in and some of the foley sounds didn't quite match up or were of varying levels. I think the video aspect of it was executed really well though!
[QUOTE=BigJoeyLemons;49863962]What really sells it for me is the limited dialogue. So many youtube videos are full of really fast talking now and it's refreshing to see some visual-centered videos[/QUOTE]
I'm totally with you, I always believe it's better to show rather than tell.
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