Hey Facepunch.
I just released a pre-release of my full album that is still in production. I thought I'd put it up here for the world to see: [url]http://plastered.bandcamp.com/[/url]
Constructive criticism would be appreciated.
Send it to all your friends, remix it, give it away, pirate it. (that is if you like it) I don't really care what you do with it.
this is really cool. nice job
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This is FUCKING AMAZING
I really hope you'll sell physical copies
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Although I think maybe you should take vocal lessons.
Just a thought, or find someone else to sing.
Not being mean, sorry if you take it that way
[QUOTE=Peavy262;18273128]This is FUCKING AMAZING
I really hope you'll sell physical copies
[editline]10:01PM[/editline]
Although I think maybe you should take vocal lessons.
Just a thought, or find someone else to sing.
Not being mean, sorry if you take it that way[/QUOTE]
Thanks! :) I probably will sell physical copies at some point. Yeah the vocals were all a little rushed. Which tracks do you think need better vocal stuff?
[QUOTE=Heres Jonny!;18275160]Thanks! :) I probably will sell physical copies at some point. Yeah the vocals were all a little rushed. Which tracks do you think need better vocal stuff?[/QUOTE]
It's not the song itself, the lyrics are great too. it just seems like you have a bit of a hard time keeping a balanced tone
Otherwise, great stuff :)
Listening to it now.
I'm enjoying Adjust. A few of the background noises are a bit too industrial, even for me, but other than that I am thoroughly enjoying it. :buddy:
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Okay, I'll admit Adjust was the only song I liked.
You need to put more confidence in your voice, and put some actual instrumentation behind them.
I'm not sure what kind of sound you were going for, but if I were to guess, dark ambient fits this best. Personally, I don't think you should do dark ambient. Adjust showed a lot of potential that, to me at least, was thrown away in the other tracks.
Just my two cents, though.
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