Jeremy's Dream - A short I made In my Broadcast class.

[jgerm529]

[media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2vC3U-Ntn8o[/media]

THis is a short scene me and 2 partners made in my Broadcast Occupations class at BOCES.

Constructive Critisiscim is welcome.

[BlackWind]

The acting made me laugh a little.

[Commando123]

It needs a little better acting. I like the concept. I really liked the ending. 8/10 from me.

[jgerm529]

Thanks, we are all juniors and this is our 6th week of being in school. So I know we have some things to improve on.