• First bit of my girlfriends story.
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nevermind
That's a pretty dumb story. If nothing of greater sophistication happens in the story, like a stockholm-syndrome romance, it's just a stupid rape story. If you're going to write crap like that, the weirdos who want to read it probably don't want to read it as an itemised list full of vaguely disgusting imagery.
How original.
That is evidently your girlfriends fantasy. The only option is to oblige her. *Massive sarcasm*.
what the fuck is up with the paragraphs? make it more structured
Your... Her... her grammar... So beautiful, so correct. Mind completely blown.
Aww, don't snip, only stuck up losers snip.
[QUOTE=Doomish;24077349]Aww, don't snip, only stuck up losers snip.[/QUOTE] I agree
Did someone take a copy of it? :v:
Wait for a god member and they can see posts before they were edited.
[QUOTE=Larcus Mywood;24132872]Wait for a god member and they can see posts before they were edited.[/QUOTE] If you meant gold member, you're wrong Only moderators can do that
[QUOTE=KanonieR;24134354]If you meant gold member, you're wrong Only moderators can do that[/QUOTE] Then we need to get a mod up in here.
[QUOTE=Larcus Mywood;24132872]Wait for a god member and they can see posts before they were edited.[/QUOTE] ????????????????????????? why would you even think gms can do that? They don't do anything.
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