So I made this animation for my class and it turned out pretty well. I have not added sound yet, but I plan on it eventually.
[url]http://www.thekyleshawadventure.com/flvs/DeathRayAnim.swf[/url]
Take it out of the media tags.
watching 20 seconds of it charging up was kinda boring, cut that down
I was expecting the mouse to see the death ray, then walk away as it was charging up.
that was good
Charge up needs to either be shorter, or more interesting. Adding things like more effects or more "mechanical" functions would be best. Maybe it should pop up from the ground, or guns keep getting unfolded from the sides so it's a massive overkill machine?
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