I've tried to make some electro in FL lately and I wanna know if it's any good.
have a listen =)
edit:
reworked the intro
[media]http://soundcloud.com/eisdespo/eisc0rn-hnx-city-final[/media]
Pretty fucking awesome, I don't know much about electro, but I liked it. I don't really like the bit that comes in at 30 seconds, the way it goes kinda diminished (I think).
All in all I think it sounds great though.
Do you think the bit that comes at 30 secs is only inappropriate in the intro or also in the rest of the song?
[QUOTE=despo;28570388]I've tried to make some electro in FL lately and I wanna know if it's any good.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/eisdespo/eis-hnx-city7[/media]
have a listen =)[/QUOTE]
That's fantastic. I love when the bass drops.
[QUOTE=despo;28574246]Do you think the bit that comes at 30 secs is only inappropriate in the intro or also in the rest of the song?[/QUOTE]
I think it could work if it was either slightly "nicer" sounding chords, or if it slowly fades in.
[QUOTE=chaz13;28580884]I think it could work if it was either slightly "nicer" sounding chords, or if it slowly fades in.[/QUOTE]
I've electrified the intro now and changed a little something about the drop, is it any better?
It still needs vocals though, gonna do em soon :D
Pretty good man, a few words of advice. I really like the intro, but I think you should kick the part at 30 seconds out and keep it minimalistic until the drop. Also, the bit before the drop lasted a bit too long.
You also need to make the drop harder, add some sub bass. Other than that, it's pretty good. The synths are great and the drums are good too. Keep making stuff!
I think the drop should come sooner, and the part at 30 secs is unnecessary i think, but overall it's already pretty nice :) The bass should be a little harder, since electro has to make you go crazy at the drop, when played on a party, so it sounds 'epic' if you know what i mean. But keep up the work! And when ready, you should make this available for download lol, always cool to use some unknown music in a dj set.
I don't think that the bassline at 1:13~ onwards should carry on to the end of the song without breaks, while it's a sick bassline it does start to grind after a while.
[QUOTE=nige111;28642878]I don't think that the bassline at 1:13~ onwards should carry on to the end of the song without breaks, while it's a sick bassline it does start to grind after a while.[/QUOTE]
Also this. U need a moment to start rebuilding to the drop, after the 'cool down', it's always like that in electro songs, else it gets boring.
Drums need [B]way[/B] more kick. Intro needs more sub bass. The drop could be more powerful, but the synth that comes in after it is pretty sweet. It wasn't bad, but so much could be improved.
[QUOTE=despo;28583989]I've electrified the intro now and changed a little something about the drop, is it any better?
It still needs vocals though, gonna do em soon :D[/QUOTE]
Fuck vocals. This song is fine the way it is
All right, Third time is the charm.
[QUOTE=Matix;28663298]Drums need [B]way[/B] more kick. Intro needs more sub bass. The drop could be more powerful, but the synth that comes in after it is pretty sweet. It wasn't bad, but so much could be improved.[/QUOTE]
Nah man I tried making the drums louder and it fucks up the whole balance of the song. Seriously not good.
[QUOTE=Feralicous;28635473]Pretty good man, a few words of advice. I really like the intro, but I think you should kick the part at 30 seconds out and keep it minimalistic until the drop. Also, the bit before the drop lasted a bit too long.
You also need to make the drop harder, add some sub bass. Other than that, it's pretty good. The synths are great and the drums are good too. Keep making stuff![/QUOTE]
done.
[media]http://soundcloud.com/eisdespo/eisc0rn-hnx-city-final[/media]
let me know if the sub bass is too loud/fucks with the song somehow
[QUOTE=nige111;28642878]I don't think that the bassline at 1:13~ onwards should carry on to the end of the song without breaks, while it's a sick bassline it does start to grind after a while.[/QUOTE]
also done.
Thanks for the superb feedback, although opinions vary a bit here.
I think you nailed it. Sounds really good. Where can I download/buy it?
[QUOTE=xXParanoidXx;28668991]I think you nailed it. Sounds really good. Where can I download/buy it?[/QUOTE]
I enabled downloading on soundcloud so you can download it there. But I just noticed the fall on the second transition is kinda not enough, I'm gonna work on that further, and there seems to be a lot of tension after the build up on 2:40 til 3:06, so I'm gonna create more "air" there
Sounds awesome, and don't add vocals, electro doesn't need that.
Sounds alot better, great work, and keep it up!
Yeah, it's definitely sounding better now, good job.
Wow, that sounds great man. Great job.
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