you've definitely got something going with the instruments, the production and overall sound is great and the songwriting could work as an instrumental jam rock piece
not a fan of the vocals though, the vocalist's voice doesn't sound consistent enough and the high notes (like .30) sound awful, it's very clear that he hasn't practiced singing high notes much
the backing vocals don't really add anything either until the chorus, where they sound pretty good, much better than the lead in my opinion
some small stuff here and there sound a bit off beat or off key and some of the production could still use improving (especially the start of the last chorus at 2.38 that doesn't feel impactful enough), but overall there's definitely potential here
practice vocals, try to fix some of the timing and make the production more dynamic and you've got a solid song here, great songwriting
[QUOTE=Hakita;45311187]you've definitely got something going with the instruments, the production and overall sound is great and the songwriting could work as an instrumental jam rock piece
not a fan of the vocals though, the vocalist's voice doesn't sound consistent enough and the high notes (like .30) sound awful, it's very clear that he hasn't practiced singing high notes much
the backing vocals don't really add anything either until the chorus, where they sound pretty good, much better than the lead in my opinion
some small stuff here and there sound a bit off beat or off key and some of the production could still use improving (especially the start of the last chorus at 2.38 that doesn't feel impactful enough), but overall there's definitely potential here
practice vocals, try to fix some of the timing and make the production more dynamic and you've got a solid song here, great songwriting[/QUOTE]
Thank you very much for that. Really do appreciate it.
Ill try and heed some of your advice and try to make this more solid.
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